Sermon (a rhyming rant at Catholics and Christians)

By shadowsinthelight

You show up on Sunday to cover your back
You drop to your knees, as you genuflect
I don't believe your heart is really in it
It's only insurance to you, you self-righteous hypocrite

You live as a Christian only one day in seven
You believe that's enough to get you to heaven
Yeah, you think that you've got it made
Because you dropped an extra dollar in the offering tray

I see you standing there with a tired look
Lip-syncing hymns, having never cracked the holy book
I don't mean to test your faith or cause you distress
You should send your prayers to the right address

Shouldn't you be praying directly to God
Instead of petitioning saints or His mom
I believe one should go straight to the top
I'm sure He will pass all your requests on

Because we live in an open society
It seems there is one God for you and another for me
Praying to angels, saints and other deities is false idolatry
There is only one light that any of us will ever see

I don't see visions in the bark of a tree
Mildew stains turning into Mother Mary
You say I don't see because I don't believe
I say you see because you are lost and need to see

Organized religion was created to control
Only a political business, not here to save your soul
I believe one should follow the goodness in the heart
God has a plan for all and we will all play our parts

Many men have murdered claiming it was God's will
But wasn't it God that gave the law, "Thou shalt not kill"
Those who do the slaughter sacrificed their honor for pride
This is the reason that, in His name, so many millions have died

Buddhists, Muslims, Hindus and the Christ killing Jews
Are damned because they don't believe the same as you do
You say, on heaven's gate there is a sign
It reads "For Christians Only"; all others go to hell, so get in line

The first shall be last, the last shall be first
You can torture and murder every being on the face of the earth
On your death bed, with your last breath, you repent
Through the pearly gates you are immediately sent

While the person who lives his life just like he should
Does nobody any harm and all of his works are good
He will suffer and burn in hell for all eternity
All because he does not believe in Christianity

Nature is full of God and his complexities
The rain falls on the good, the evil, you and me
The golden rule is the only way to be
I will treat you the way I want you to treat me

Follow that one rule and no commandments would ever be broken
There would be peace on earth; no lies would ever be spoken
But this is a dream that will never ever be
For we are only humans and our hearts overflow with lust and greed

We all do what we must do each day to get us through
Every morning I say, today, I will try to follow that golden rule
Well, that is my philosophy and my point of view
And in the end, we will all be revealed the truth

©1998 by steve giacomini

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Copyright 2003 shadowsinthelight
Published on Monday, May 5, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Well...after staring at the end of the poem for 5 minutes...I decided a comment was in order. This is almost perfection.

  • A former member wrote: *searching for words* uh..yeah. right-fucking-on!

  • The Fallen Angel On Thursday, August 21, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    HEY, THIS IS GOOD!! just another favorite

  • A former member wrote: I don't know why you would call this the anti christ poem... but anyway, I thought it was good stuff, saw a lot of anti catholicism there, hehe, but yeah, I suppose the catholic church is the biggest relig. org. yeah man, good message too. ;)

  • blackdarkness On Saturday, May 10, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    Fuck yes..FUCK YES...I LOVE THIS

  • DarkPoet On Wednesday, May 7, 2003, DarkPoet (229)By person wrote:

    interesting and mostly in keeping with my own faith, cheers Scholar

  • GothicBlack On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    OK wow, first off this is brilliantly written and well I cant help but bow to your intelligence. not many in the masses can even comprehend this, never mind understand it, live it and then write such a superb poem about it. WOW! A thousand times I bow to

  • GothicBlack On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    A thousand times I bow to you! ~gothic~

  • manywalks On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Very strong and direct piece. Simply excellent as I have come to expect from you. ~ w

  • liquid_emotion On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    I want to meet you. A man after my very heart... speaking truth through this dark... and I am in awe. You have your head on straight my friend:) Even if noone in the world got it.. I am just really impressed

  • Six-Out On Monday, May 5, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Steve, I mean, what can I say? Really? MR said it all, ex-fucking-actly. This was so real, and so....just damn. Steve, ok, I now have a new favorite of yours. ..Wow..

  • maddin foxxxy On Monday, May 5, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    sounds like a rap song and a FKIN GOOD ONE! this are just my thoughts gathered over the years after observations and analisis of this kinds of ppl in an all-catholic school...how can they claim humbleness dressed in their Versaces?!

  • liquid_emotion On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    hey, I happen to love versace's stuff and I'm not exactly un-humble:p

  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, May 10, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    then u haven't seen the starvation and poverty in my country...compared to that

  • A former member wrote: *falters for something to say* EX-FUCKING-ACTLY!!!!! omg this was just fucking right ON! much respect shadows :) GREAT GREAT write (and not just cuz i agree with the message of the poem)

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