remorse code

By swing_the_hammer

he asks what i'm thinkin
'cause he hears me blinkin
so i tell him i'm thinkin

about quietly sinkin

in a bottomless lake
on an oragami ship
where silence means peace

and my eyelids don't click...

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Published on Wednesday, April 16, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "remorse code"

On Sunday, March 31, 2013, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Bibdabibbibibib....Message: This is wicked..And Mikey's right..This does beg to be set to music.
On Tuesday, March 15, 2011, Phalanx (628) wrote:

A clever roll of taps, simple in a satisfying fashion. Nice work.
A former member wrote: really like this, it has a soft relaxing sway.
On Tuesday, September 8, 2009, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

:)
On Thursday, April 17, 2008, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

This BEGS to be put to music.
A former member wrote: oh so true! thatd be so kickass ^_^
On Thursday, April 17, 2008, RubyXero (481) wrote:

short, sweet, and SUPER!! i liked it. :D
A former member wrote: simple but moving.
A former member wrote: a cool little tiddley bit.
On Wednesday, April 16, 2008, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

hit me again.
A former member wrote: i likes this. ^_^