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remorse code
By swing_the_hammer
he asks what i'm thinkin
'cause he hears me blinkin
so i tell him i'm thinkin
about quietly sinkin
in a bottomless lake
on an oragami ship
where silence means peace
and my eyelids don't click...
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© 2008 swing_the_hammer
Published on Wednesday, April 16, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, March 31, 2013, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Bibdabibbibibib....Message: This is wicked..And Mikey's right..This does beg to be set to music.
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2011, Phalanx
(679) wrote:
A clever roll of taps, simple in a satisfying fashion. Nice work.
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A former member wrote:
really like this, it has a soft relaxing sway.
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On Tuesday, September 8, 2009, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
:)
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On Thursday, April 17, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This BEGS to be put to music.
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A former member wrote:
oh so true! thatd be so kickass ^_^
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On Thursday, April 17, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
short, sweet, and SUPER!! i liked it. :D
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A former member wrote:
simple but moving.
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A former member wrote:
a cool little tiddley bit.
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On Wednesday, April 16, 2008, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
hit me again.
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A former member wrote:
i likes this. ^_^
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