Darken my Doorway

By dark_sister

Don't darken my doorway,
with your jagged-edged smile
reflecting every eclipse of the sun.
Don't haunt my windows,
with your why's and your taunts.
I can hide safely in the hall,
but only for so long.
I need to clean out this mess,
and all I can feel
is the draining of my blood.

So you can darken my doorway,
and rob the room of love,
and you can sink me
with your diamond sharp teeth,
and cast a pale along the walls.
But I will live like a ghost,
before I will let you think you've won.

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Copyright 2003 dark_sister
Published on Thursday, November 20, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Railway_Butterfly On Saturday, August 13, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (353)By person wrote:

    This is wonderful. I rarely enjoy darker reads any more quite so much as I did this.. I thought this was delightful.. heart stopping. Thank you :)

  • KittyStryker On Friday, January 16, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    this would make a lovely song... it's dark, and almost... i want to say wicked, but not really. it's the smile a girl gives when she knows she has the control after all... and she'll use it.

  • A former member wrote: mmm...delightfully sinister, the ending was like a punch in the face...amazing...

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