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shine
By Taunting The Reaper
I’m peeling back pages
like slow ebbing tides of time
I’m crossing lines out
and putting lines in
all the things I shouldn’t of said
all the things I should have said
I’m highlighting every word
I ever heard you say
because you’re my religion
and I have faith
I’m your ocean
you’re my moonlight
shine on me
shine on
just shine
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© 2008 William Bermudez
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero
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wrote:
lovely piece. the faith...wow. that was a great metaphor. the last stanza was wonderful indeed. so beautiful. your words bring out the beauty... i love it. :)
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
awe.........this is really touching,,,,,i cant even pick somthing to highlight....its all beautiful..really.....beautiful
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