Counting with wolves

By Taunting The Reaper

I’m tossing and turning
and I’m wide awake.
I’ve been counting sheep
like lost pennies
but I can’t sleep.

I keep counting
and
counting
and it’s starting to sound
like a wolf howling.
if I listen closely
I can hear the pain in his voice.

he comes for me
when I count sheep.
he howls to remind me
that he’s always been there
counting right along with me.
I guess this is better than counting alone
but the sound of his voice
always keeps me awake.

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© 2008 William Bermudez
Published on Wednesday, February 6, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Idle Monkey On Wednesday, February 6, 2008, Idle Monkey (10)By person wrote:

    My sleep habits have been butchered lately so I've spent plenty of time counting my own sheep. I dig this.

  • Army Barbie On Wednesday, February 6, 2008, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    Boy do I ever understand that. But for me I'd assume I'd have a tiger not a wolf? Good job


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