generating electrons in diatonic waveforms
By Jonas
so they theorize again about the beginning of the end of this
world in so far as it relates to the human race
then i wonder
if it even matters that i've decided to eat less in the way of processed
meats
if there is a god will he let us touch the stars before he reveals himself
and i find myself curious about how many people will die on this one day
lately i haven't been able to escape the inevitability of this reality
even though i am thoroughly convinced it doesn't matter it can't matter
if it mattered something so universal might act as a binding agent
i listen to a little bit of music(air shaking in pockets of hard and soft)
a loop of the stuff of my own hand
so i marvel at electronics
and our breaking down of the simple laws of the invisible
leads us to deduce probable cause and effect reactions
within a realm we don't even begin to percieve
finally silence breaks the room as the others of the house return
and i find my grip on this slipping
slipping away too soon
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Comments on "generating electrons in diatonic waveforms"
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On Wednesday, July 19, 2017, Leineco
(59) wrote:
In a world swirling with insidious distractions, your poem captured my attention with absolute tunnel-like hypnosis - a rare feat these days. Bravo and sincere thanks!
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On Sunday, April 26, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
Wow this reminds me of a certain poem I wrote mixed with a poem I'm working on now. So naturally I really like your style of writing. Nice!
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2009, lovechild
(43) wrote:
oh i never thought i would com across another poet with a scientific slant! yes u r good!!
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On Monday, May 26, 2008, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
you have an innate perception of what passes upon the human experience......well done my friend.........urban
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
wish you would write something again...
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, Liz
(265) wrote:
so do you think you could marvel your way to the answers about god if the others would only stay out of the house while you're thinking?
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On Thursday, October 4, 2007, Jonas
(715) wrote:
no i could just marvel indefinitely
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
the questions inside this will never cease to swirl .. how'd they move that perfect pocket of air when B.F. was talking to peachy peach about kissy kiss? even J.B. Lansing couldn't imagine the weapon he was helping to create and what it
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
would eventually make air do. it's a shame the others returned when they did .. there was so much more ... as always ... thanks ... funguy
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
cool rhythm
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On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
ditto
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Yeah, I'm thinking about seeing about hitching unto some gravitons and jumping over to a new dimension...aw, nevermind...not really sure if I want to lose this brane quite yet. *Wonders what silence is like
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
taking us into the space of a minds view. Love it.
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A former member wrote:
liked this more than I can say with this incredibly unworthy comment...