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the hunger
By Johny_D_Lewis
she stalks her prey
needing him, leading him
dressed in short sexy skirt
taunting him, teasing
sitting at the bar alone
tempting them, seducing them
pulling her shirt up
showing him, offering to him
leaving with him to go to a motel
touching him, kissing him
taking each others clothes off
on top of him, taking him
taking him deep into her
pleasing him, enjoying him
riding him harder and faster
grining at him, kissing him
grabbing a knife hidden under the pillow
slicing him, stabbing him
his body still in motion
taking him, killing him
finishing what she has began
enjoying him, now leaving him
she's getting dressed, walking out the door
done with him, she left him
back to the bar she goes
tempting him, taunting him
she hungers for more
wanting him, needing him.
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Copyright 2004 roachy
Published on Thursday, March 18, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "the hunger"
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1454)
wrote:
oh how the black widow dances! that was so cool!! A+ b
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On Friday, May 7, 2004, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
its sad to say but...this kinda made me think of myself
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, finaldestiny
(74) wrote:
awww thats soo cool, i was wondering in the beggining how the title fits and then i got to the end and it all melted together which was really cool, it kept me on edge as i was reading and was intense, nice job ~Finaldestiny~
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Emma Tenebrae
(13) wrote:
Wow roachy ... good write. Ummm you wouldn't happen to be thinking that perhaps women are more related to that imfamous black widow than we care to let on eh?
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
subversive, and dark...........well done..........urban
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
ack a succubus!!!!!!!
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
woah...im loving the rhythm of this piece....almost like a sick nursery rhyme...sounded a bit like me on my birthday night...til the killing part obv, anyways very well done, a eery yet kinda seductive piece ;)
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
wow..that was pretty damn kool keeper
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