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911
By Drifter
dial the numbers
today's the day
i watch it fall
to dirt and clay
pain and sorrow
anger and hate
expeirence the love
a war can create
we come together
when we fall apart
wave bye to peace
time to depart
we come together
not quite seeing why
those buildings burn
why these people fry
"We the people"
are fucking morons
we still cant see
after all that went on
We cause our pain
with greed and desire
so burn all your gods
in the smoldering fire
ashes to ashes
dust to dust
dollar to dollar
father to son
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Copyright 2003 RabidDrone
Published on Sunday, November 9, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 28, 2009, Blood Saga
(81)
wrote:
You're right, we are all morons.
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A former member wrote:
Its a sad thing but, true. :-) Excellent write. ][ ][
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On Saturday, September 29, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
So the rhyme was fantastic, and in all it was a good piece. Have to give respect where it's due. Although, I could never read it a second time. As Charlotte said, we have two totally different views.
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On Friday, March 16, 2007, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
Loved it..loved it..loved it!! Tight rhythm, smooth flow and a brilliant message to wake up and seek the truth and do something about it. Carl
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On Monday, October 8, 2007, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
Read this again. You say exactly what I wanted to say about 9/11 without getting anywhere near over-wrought. Fantastic.
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On Monday, October 8, 2007, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
Plus that title, cleverly omitting the '/' =)
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
I like this. It's fast and doesn't fuck around with the point. It's not condeming just...laying it out. Yeah, this is something to come back to.
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A former member wrote:
very amazing
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A former member wrote:
There are no words to explain...
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A former member wrote:
deeply felt. wow, man. the pretext for war on the world, the advancement of globalist corporatism. call it what you will... call it the beginning of the end. ignorance the people pursue for bitter fruits of denial.
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Well spoken, very well spoken, I think everyone had something to think on that day...
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
If this were mine, I would be proud..... P.S. This world is ruled by Karma!
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
fu-kin' awesome!
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
i agree!
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
i agree too.....very awesome, i like~saint~
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
i really like it, i would say i like the end alot, but i like it the same, just differently, the same but differently, the same but differently....
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
The quick, start and stop design of this poem is neat to follow. You've done a great job with it. As far as content goes, our veiws are apparently too far apart for me to find any agreeable thing to say about it. ~JMDW~
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
good poem i like it.. especially the ending
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
very intersting.. thought provoking ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
thats a twisted ending..i like it
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