Comments by ardneK
- "wow.......that is deep...awesome write awesome, I'll be watching your work more - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "Free" by Dr Benway
- "I'd love to hear you sing that, beautiful write, I relate as many other will, and that is perfect for lyrics. - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "Non-reality" by StAinedNblood
- "You cant comment when a piece is just too good, I read this with awe and understanding, because it just speaks to me, I can feel your emotions wash over me in your words - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "riverside reveries. -a lucid goodbye" by Six-Out
- "In the beginning I was hooked, I could feel your emotion, but then it started to fall apart at the end, I think it started with the rhyming 'ore's. It ruins the piece. But all in all good write - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "Lament for the lost" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Thats good, though the end feels like it could be better, Good write - >|"
Posted by ardneK on "Kill Me" by Jenni
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