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By Dr Benway
Wrapped in a poorly lit bathroom stall,
"tear another hole sexy, maybe two just to be sure."
The pounding of the music slows,
long enough to hear a heartbeat,
Is it mine or is it hers?
I don't think it matters.
Sitting side by side,
swilling away on bittersweet gibberish,
cliché burning on my chapped lips.
A warm kiss and a warmer suggestion,
"It tastes like poison but at least its free right?"
Ya, at least it's free...
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Copyright 2005 Dr Benway on a house call
Published on Tuesday, February 8, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, A Velvet Tongue
(436)
wrote:
nothing is free there is always.....cost....*muah*
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On Sunday, March 27, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
"least its all free".... i love it, short with few words, yet strong and with much meaning..~saint~
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
pleasant little surprise ... tossed like a hip cinch ... dug it completely ... funguy
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
this reads like a scene from a movie in my mind.... like an arthouse flick that's deliberately underrated..... the last line is a killer. thank you.
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, Dr Benway
(48) wrote:
That has to be one of the coolest compliments I have ever received. thanks, that made me smile
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
wow.......that is deep...awesome write awesome, I'll be watching your work more - >|
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
shit your amazing...
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
That's it. You're going on my favorites. 'Nuff said.
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A former member wrote:
definitely creepy, but in a very good way. i like how you ended it...
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, thinevoicetragic
(52) wrote:
awesome write.
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
God, do I know this all too well...
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
creepy yet seductive. very nice.
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A former member wrote:
wow this one really kept my attention, and i loved the ending. great write. .........................-samone
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
words of pain and beauty...love it! ~AoD
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
and i'm glad to see you writing more...you know how much i love reading your writes..hehe..
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