Free

By Dr Benway

Wrapped in a poorly lit bathroom stall,
"tear another hole sexy, maybe two just to be sure."
The pounding of the music slows,
long enough to hear a heartbeat,
Is it mine or is it hers?
I don't think it matters.

Sitting side by side,
swilling away on bittersweet gibberish,
cliché burning on my chapped lips.
A warm kiss and a warmer suggestion,
"It tastes like poison but at least its free right?"

Ya, at least it's free...

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Published on Tuesday, February 8, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Free"

On Thursday, March 31, 2005, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

nothing is free there is always.....cost....*muah*
On Sunday, March 27, 2005, Saint_Reaper (200) wrote:

"least its all free".... i love it, short with few words, yet strong and with much meaning..~saint~
On Saturday, February 12, 2005, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

pleasant little surprise ... tossed like a hip cinch ... dug it completely ... funguy
On Friday, February 11, 2005, Lotophagi (333) wrote:

this reads like a scene from a movie in my mind.... like an arthouse flick that's deliberately underrated..... the last line is a killer. thank you.
On Friday, February 11, 2005, Dr Benway (48) wrote:

That has to be one of the coolest compliments I have ever received. thanks, that made me smile
On Thursday, February 10, 2005, ardneK (72) wrote:

wow.......that is deep...awesome write awesome, I'll be watching your work more - >|
On Thursday, February 10, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

shit your amazing...
On Thursday, February 10, 2005, Zara Synn (57) wrote:

That's it. You're going on my favorites. 'Nuff said.
A former member wrote: definitely creepy, but in a very good way. i like how you ended it...
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, thinevoicetragic (52) wrote:

awesome write.
On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

God, do I know this all too well...
On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, sIo (898) wrote:

creepy yet seductive. very nice.
A former member wrote: wow this one really kept my attention, and i loved the ending. great write. .........................-samone
On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917) wrote:

words of pain and beauty...love it! ~AoD
On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917) wrote:

and i'm glad to see you writing more...you know how much i love reading your writes..hehe..