Comments by Dr Benway
- "I think the reason I like your work so much, is the physical placement of each word, very deliberate. To me, a lot of your work reads like the stuff that came out of the surrealist movement using the Cut-up technique.
Just a thought."
Posted by Dr Benway on "embracing the caterpillar of perception(s)" by AniDayz
- "Wow, this poem feels like it was pulled from my head. Damn man, I know I use this word a lot, but this is so very Vivid. So many pictures in just a few words..."
Posted by Dr Benway on "A piece of me for you" by Leith Plunkett
- "YA! I came back to see a few people's work, and all your was gone. I used to look forward to every word you would give us. Thank you for this. The flow is so catchy, I can just hear you reading it. So again, thank you"
Posted by Dr Benway on "satellite guages & all i don't know" by AniDayz
- "When i read this i saw you sitting in this small room clanking away on an old type writer. One dead tree branch in view out the window right in front of you.
For some reason i almost hear you laughing when i read this, as if to say "I can't believe I am "
Posted by Dr Benway on "real men admit to their tears." by Six-Out
- "ya, everything I do is rough. I am not one of those people that thinks it's wrong to edit a poem, but if I were to edit all the grammer/spelling etc. Errors, I would over heat my computer with the spell checker. :)"
Posted by Dr Benway on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "I love really personal poems like this. Instead of trying to figure out what the person was trying to say, I try and find my own meaning in them. This one painted some pretty vivid pictures in my head. So, thank you."
Posted by Dr Benway on "I Caught You" by Crysa
- "I agree with everything said so far, this painted a such a harsh picture. I am going to read some of your other work. So far everything I have read is amazing"
Posted by Dr Benway on "~*~ Fly With Me~*~" by A Velvet Tongue
- "this poem feels alot different from many of the other poems of yours I have read. Like I have said before, you express angst+loneliness in your writing in a way very few can. This was no exception I only wish you didn't need to suffer so, to find"
Posted by Dr Benway on "empty ships. [lost hope in a halo]" by Six-Out
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