old poem inspired by life and donnie darko
By swing_the_hammer
I. A Friend
Maybe it's just my schizo tendencies
But you smell like death
And you look a little tired-
I feel the same-
Visions driving me insane...
(I heard the note resounding long before
he ever touched the piano)
II. My Love
I wake up with my arms in the air,
crying out to you but
I guess I forgot to tell you about it
in the morning
You woke up punching the wall...
Alone and thinking of me
Now I see how we need each other
Now I see
III. Breakdown and a Sunset
I scream, a soul-scream
heartbreaking and filled with
some unnamed emotion
Then I run (fly).
I like to pretend I am running away,
though I know I will return.
I see the sun going down
and the sky is just so goddamn beautiful,
I cry because I know it is fake
I cry because I know I will lose it soon
And I am right.
The sun sets again.
"Then I find it kinda funny
I find it kinda sad
The dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had..."
-Mad World-
Comments on "old poem inspired by life and donnie darko"
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On Friday, January 6, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
That is one of my favorite movies. This is an amazing write. ^V^
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On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
once again, a wonderful write by you.
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A former member wrote:
Yikes! This was stupendous! It felt like all the beauty in the world is rushing around, making everybody sad.
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
this was absolutely fuckin awesome. i felt every single emotion, and I related very well too. quite the effective piece. . .very well done
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, ardneK
(72) wrote:
Beautiful so much emotion wrapped up in this, I love it - >|