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Millimetre No. 9
By island warrior
You went out of your way
To hurt me today
You shouldn't have done it
Now it's my turn to play
The gates are open
Let the games begin
Evil has awoken
No one can win
You may pray for mercy
There's none in me
Buttons were pushed
Strikes number three
I tried to warn you
You wouldn't listen then
It's too late now
It's not if but when
So when you're walkin' down the street
Remember to look behind
Cutting throught the darkness
Millimetre No. 9
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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Monday, January 31, 2005.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely amazing. multiple people have gone out of their way to hurt me. thak you for this poem.
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A former member wrote:
such hatred and spite. love ittt!!!!!!!!!!
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On Tuesday, November 17, 2009, Winter Born
(169)
wrote:
hatred and rage with such musical eloquence! I love it!
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A former member wrote:
very intense and pulsing...the rhythm is great. good job ~Tamara
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Loved it - great twist on the Love Potion song! : ) Ciao, T/S
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, HiImFromJupiter
(11) wrote:
So vicious, I love vicious.....
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
biting.... this moves so quickly..... great imagery, and I love the concept. Rocking piece. Thank you.
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
I like this. There's kind of a sickness about the whole thing. Very cool.
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On Monday, January 31, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
I'd have to agree with Ani, though it is simplistic form, it captures your emotion perfectly and is intense - >|
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On Monday, January 31, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
*catches breath* this is intense. the first stanza is an exceptional introduction to this. the flow is so rhythmic, its all echoeing in my brain. very well written and expressed.
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