Lament for the lost
By Lord Kalgalath
A gentle spewing of tender words of comfort
Deaf ears
the only ones to hear the murmurs of forgotten mourners
Face of an obsidian column
sheathed in flesh as yeilding
cloaked in desolations dew
dripping slowly
from eyes of garnet hue
wary of all
for nothing seems true
so the pen carves paper
like knives for you
and the parchment shards
pierce your soul through
each with the words that you dread to hear
so we hang between the lines
of what we'll compensate for
A flotilla of rafts drifting farther from shore
never suspecting that this was in store
despite all the tales and all the lost lore
noone could have ever felt this before
as though realities rent
and the walls torn down
as we commit our dear friend
to the cold ground.
For Atalanta,
And all the others we have lost.
Comments on "Lament for the lost"
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On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Vivid and painful. You express things so well
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
the beggining was magnificent. words i could see in my mind. amazing work.
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A former member wrote:
That was so amazing... Filled with such emotion... - Holly
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On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
oh christ, Dev...*hugs*
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On Friday, January 14, 2005, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
This was a co-op.. two others helped me, but it was a long time agao, and I've just had it sitting.. I don't remember who it was so if it was you come forth and take your credit.
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On Thursday, January 13, 2005, GirlintheBox
(41) wrote:
i like the rhyming "ore's"
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On Thursday, January 13, 2005, ardneK
(72) wrote:
In the beginning I was hooked, I could feel your emotion, but then it started to fall apart at the end, I think it started with the rhyming 'ore's. It ruins the piece. But all in all good write - >|
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was so sad and full of dispair, it weighed down my heart as i read it, and it read like the slow roll of a tear drop ~kristy
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
They are the memories that haunt the night in the bitter hours...They are the worst I think. Imagining them behind the corner, or in lookalikes down the street...Hard thoughts...