Comments by Pride Ed
- "Its elegant and raw! Its sensuous and daring!
Each line feeds into each other, building desire up to the point where it can no longer be contained.
Great poem!!!
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Posted by Pride Ed on "voir les anges" by FadedBlues
- "Yes. I do realize that this was posted a long time ago, and that its possible the author will never see this comment, but this has got to be the most saddest, raw, beautifully written piece that I have come across on this site. The pain is expressed is real, and matter-of-fact. Anyone who has, or had a broken heart can relate to this!
A very personal, yet awesome read!
^_^"
Posted by Pride Ed on "Letter Written Burned To Autumn Ashes" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I read this and feel as though the narrator is forsaken in someway, be it in the biblical sense presented here, or in a meaning that goes deep beyond that. "
Posted by Pride Ed on "cobalt" by Corinthian
- "The style! The form! So simple in words, yet aesthetically pleasing to the eye like a work of art. No! This is art; you made a sculpture out of words, and that is remarkable.
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Posted by Pride Ed on "'';@_.__.__.__." by gumshoe
- "I'm certainly not the first to say this, but this poem struck a chord where it hurts most. The most fundamental pieces of human error summed up nicely in a way that reads like art, yet taunts you with a suddenly sickening realization of how flawed and indecisive the human psyche is...
Beautifully written. "
Posted by Pride Ed on "Beautiful Transgressions." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "Ah, yes! I remember the day I wrote this. I was 16 and my father just made me lose out on a life-changing opportunity. With 'Paradise Lost,' and 'Dante's Inferno' still fresh in my head I wrote this! lol
Thank you for reading. ^_^"
Posted by Pride Ed on "The Sinner." by Pride Ed
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