Bluebirds and Moths.
By Pride Ed
I loved how hollow the nights were after I crucified them to my walls.
I sing to them when I tap the glass,
my fingerprints smiling on the dust that reminds me of their empty shells.
How many times have I touched their caskets?
My shadowboxes of happiness.
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Copyright 2014 Pride Ed
Author's Note:
Originally published on Bloody Feather on June 2, 2014.Comments on "Bluebirds and Moths."
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
I love unique writing and it's always good to read something different. I have you say your thoughts are wonderfully displayed in this piece. Welcome to the valley. -TG
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2014, Pride Ed
(107) wrote:
Thanks! I'm glad you think its a unique piece. ^_^
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On Monday, June 16, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
Wow.There is not a single aspect of this I did not fall in love with.Your work amazes me dear Pride!Brilliant write!
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On Monday, June 16, 2014, Pride Ed
(107) wrote:
Thank you so much! I was actually quite iffy about posting this one. ^_^'
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...loved the wordchoices...this is Beautiful.
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On Monday, June 16, 2014, Pride Ed
(107) wrote:
Thanks! My mind juggled between adding a bluebird instead of a raven or crow, but "shadowboxes of happiness" let me do just that. lol