Tales from the Aagean Sea

By sheff

:.

Acerbus.

betrayed by my own blood!

truly- the Styx will run on!-

despite every bribe presented

so i am swindled like a Pollux

halfway through hell and heaven

such as you, who left me on Naxos

when another moved in

capsizing the very ship

i built for your freedom

and what could be said of the slain Minotaur?

you are no better.

:.

.

Nescio.

You held my clew-

never once losing sight

in such milky horizons-

i held your hand

long enough

to lose my

way

.

.

Filia; Fio.

had i been Hesperides-

the evening would have sustained.

and not a soul, but i, could have plucked you

from the tree.

.

:.

Calco.

bending the trees to new extents,

he stretched open

like a worm drying out

in the sun-

he writhed and wrung

like a desert escapade.

stole the heart of two,

the strength of a thousand,

killed the spirit of one,

innocent lamb,

before wearing

the death out of

her golden fleece.

.

.

Poena.

and what of morality?

when we fling ourselves from the Aegean Sea?

we dig our graves as soon as we

exit the womb.

yes-

what man knows of true fire

when he is slowly drowning in the hydra?

even Thetis has warned us

we shall soon perish in war

yet we believe ourselves immortal

that life is everlasting

that we are swifter

than the rising tide

of the consequence of Sin-..

who is just delicately waiting

to sweep us

 

-away

.

.

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Copyright 2012 sheff
Published on Monday, February 6, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, February 26, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Interesting use of mythological concepts. I enjoyed this because of its word flow and the sense of tranquility left after reading it. Good stuff. :)

  • A former member wrote: I had to come back to this because I love all things Greek, and I love to see written work inspired by Greece. Thank you so much for this gem, darlin'. Rebs:).

  • A former member wrote: This was the first poem in weeks that made me log in to read fully. The only thing that jarred is your use of uncapitalized first person. As the late Tom Lux told me, despite e e cummings, grammar and punctuation are still very relevant to poetry. He also hated that MS Word capped the first letter in each line and that you had to go back to uncap them. I will now take a look at your other work.

  • A former member wrote: Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Reb:).

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, January 27, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "yet we believe ourselves immortal that life is everlasting that we are swifter than the rising tide" - so true...ignoring the fleeting nature of our existence is how we can justify wasting it... i love this piece and all the mythological references it contains. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: You've written the little charms and so truthfully and imaginatively. It feels forceful and true to its temperament, or rather the gods. I really enjoyed how the murals paint a timeless lesson. makes us all think and feel inside deeper and deeper. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Amazing...one of my favourites...strange and talented...great! Scholar

  • dwells On Wednesday, February 8, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Sheff, I thought my mythology was pretty good but I need some help with this one (my shortcoming). Well-written tale and wonderfully expressed. WElcome again to DP and if you spread your stuff out, you'll get more comments as I'm sure you know by now. Quite the skillful addition to our website, thanks.

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