Tales from the Aagean Sea
By sheff
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Acerbus.
betrayed by my own blood!
truly- the Styx will run on!-
despite every bribe presented
so i am swindled like a Pollux
halfway through hell and heaven
such as you, who left me on Naxos
when another moved in
capsizing the very ship
i built for your freedom
and what could be said of the slain Minotaur?
you are no better.
:.
.
Nescio.
You held my clew-
never once losing sight
in such milky horizons-
i held your hand
long enough
to lose my
way
.
.
Filia; Fio.
had i been Hesperides-
the evening would have sustained.
and not a soul, but i, could have plucked you
from the tree.
.
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Calco.
bending the trees to new extents,
he stretched open
like a worm drying out
in the sun-
he writhed and wrung
like a desert escapade.
stole the heart of two,
the strength of a thousand,
killed the spirit of one,
innocent lamb,
before wearing
the death out of
her golden fleece.
.
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Poena.
and what of morality?
when we fling ourselves from the Aegean Sea?
we dig our graves as soon as we
exit the womb.
yes-
what man knows of true fire
when he is slowly drowning in the hydra?
even Thetis has warned us
we shall soon perish in war
yet we believe ourselves immortal
that life is everlasting
that we are swifter
than the rising tide
of the consequence of Sin-..
who is just delicately waiting
to sweep us
-away
.
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Awards
Comments on "Tales from the Aagean Sea"
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Interesting use of mythological concepts. I enjoyed this because of its word flow and the sense of tranquility left after reading it. Good stuff. :)
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A former member wrote:
I had to come back to this because I love all things Greek, and I love to see written work inspired by Greece. Thank you so much for this gem, darlin'. Rebs:).
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A former member wrote:
This was the first poem in weeks that made me log in to read fully. The only thing that jarred is your use of uncapitalized first person. As the late Tom Lux told me, despite e e cummings, grammar and punctuation are still very relevant to poetry. He also hated that MS Word capped the first letter in each line and that you had to go back to uncap them. I will now take a look at your other work.
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A former member wrote:
Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Reb:).
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On Monday, January 27, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"yet we believe ourselves immortal that life is everlasting that we are swifter than the rising tide" - so true...ignoring the fleeting nature of our existence is how we can justify wasting it... i love this piece and all the mythological references it contains. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
You've written the little charms and so truthfully and imaginatively. It feels forceful and true to its temperament, or rather the gods. I really enjoyed how the murals paint a timeless lesson. makes us all think and feel inside deeper and deeper.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...one of my favourites...strange and talented...great!
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On Wednesday, February 8, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Sheff, I thought my mythology was pretty good but I need some help with this one (my shortcoming). Well-written tale and wonderfully expressed. WElcome again to DP and if you spread your stuff out, you'll get more comments as I'm sure you know by now. Quite the skillful addition to our website, thanks.