Comments by suicideseason

  • "Oh,man...that first verse is killa dilla.sweat tastes of contempt...the disgust is overflowing.I fucking love it...The whole piece felt like watching someone having a major break down and having a hearty laugh about it..."
    Posted by suicideseason on "[empty words] you break my heart." by Six-Out
  • "This is a wonder,Jon...the cars collide verse was over the top...sheer brutality showing no weakness...the fall...the reaching...the spinning...the impact...the dying glimmer...then...nothing."
    Posted by suicideseason on "azariel- [larmes de ciel]" by Six-Out
  • "Humanity...unhappy seeing...feeling...must possess and imprison...strangle the beauty out of the metaphorical fair maiden...and then bitch because death is ugly...and the world is to blame...fuck everybody."
    Posted by suicideseason on "[bane]" by Six-Out
  • "The flames from the deepest recesses of Hell ain't got nothing (in terms of burning intensity) on this sexy little number.Engulfing...passionate...nice boob job on this,slut.i don't even see any scars.;)"
    Posted by suicideseason on "[rainbows].and.[butterflies]" by Six-Out
  • "The opening...rained a-bombs...apathy.oh apathy come home...my dear man...such feeling in the words, "my hands are sore"...blows the mind,man.It just gets heavier and heavier the more you read..."
    Posted by suicideseason on "logical-apathy. [my hands are sore]" by Six-Out
  • "Your lip descriptions do me proud...this was like wafting through the clouds on a starless night...until the crash landing of a last stanza earthed me again in the foreverness of reality..."
    Posted by suicideseason on "pick-sul.ated [persuasion]" by Six-Out
  • "You portray the downward spiral with such eloquence...I could quote...but it would end up looking like Cliff Notes when I was done.This is so incredibly cold, yet I find comfort in the familiarity of it all."
    Posted by suicideseason on "empty ships. [lost hope in a halo]" by Six-Out
  • ""and the happy ending is a lie because Snow White will eventually die"...just wicked.This is so cold and empty...it got exceedingly more powerful the more I read.I feel ya,man.Damn,this is deep."
    Posted by suicideseason on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
  • "Jon...wow,man...this is everything that we have,had, or wanted to have...fucking stolen from us...and then smiling sweetly as we try to pick up the pieces...the wind comes in over the mountain...we die as the Sun sets."
    Posted by suicideseason on ".restitution. -divinity defined" by Six-Out
  • "Liquid apathy...give me a shot of that too.Jon...I wouldn't know where to start with this one right now...I'll be back to comment properly,but well fucking done."
    Posted by suicideseason on "[crash&burn]" by Six-Out
  • ""in the water- as we lost track of tomorrow"...what a beautiful thought.No worries.No problems...able to let go of everything unimportant to the very moment at hand...*sighs* Beautiful,Jon...Always."
    Posted by suicideseason on "fourty-two ashes" by Six-Out
  • "Man...you write beautifully,Jon.I've sat here for at least 15 minutes trying to disgorge a decent comment.My words can do this no justice.It's just beautiful."
    Posted by suicideseason on "poetry." by Six-Out
  • "Dude...the imagery oozes...such a complete picture of hopeless blackness...a solution that you don't have to live with...this is sheer power...laced with grace."
    Posted by suicideseason on "acrid" by Six-Out
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