Comments by Deviated09

  • "Love the styling of this. It really gives the insight into the chaotic, driven mind of someone addicted, needing that next move, living in the moment, never wanting the bliss to end or accept what reality is slamming against you"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "ADDICTED" by poe_lover28
  • "Many thanks for your generous comment madam =] (I don't know why my replies were never posted on here, I guess my phone is being difficult again..) I'm glad I was able to offer you some entertainment!"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "The Spirits Inside" by Deviated09
  • "I'm touched, and quite enthralled by this.. Many thanks, good sir! That is why I made this account, so that I could share what I have to who ever may need to see it to get that little bit of inspiration or thought that they were looking for. If it helps just one person out in some way, then I know I have done my part. I know I still need a lot of practice and a lot of work on it, but I still have many years to do so. "
    Posted by Deviated09 on "The Spirits Inside" by Deviated09
  • "Being thrown over the line and dragged out of view of it a few times, I know how the worst of pains can be. You have a pretty clear view of the lost, numb soul trying to feel, trying to be. Very good write"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Mirror Mirror On the Wall" by poe_lover28
  • "Very good write my friend. I can fit pieces of my own path into that all too well. I like how you set the rythm and rhymes thoughout. Nice work! :-)"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
  • "Wow.. just wow... Very excellent write. I know these curses and how they can affect one. Very beautifully wrote!"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "my precious soldier" by Sin
  • "Very good write here. The introspective mind is usually the sharpest. Just know that you make the looks of your identity, both to others and yourself. If you don't like what you see in the mirror and can't change, atleast putting on another mask will help make things tolerable until change can be met.. keep the pen flowing as these feelings may surge. That alone may be enough to help"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
  • "I'm glad it was able to help you. What you said is basically what I did. I had a small bout of being overwhelmed by some memories and I just started writing. Wasn't sure how it would turn out but I just kept going."
    Posted by Deviated09 on "My admission. My soul." by Deviated09
  • "Thank you! I would share more of my work but I'm very busy lately taking care of work/family/business/etc and rarely get to be on here anymore.. I hope you enjoyed the material! I'm happy to share what I can to the world."
    Posted by Deviated09 on "My writing just is." by Deviated09
  • "Thanks for the criticism and advice :-) that was just the rough write, I didn't do any editing except for a duplicated sentence I missed.. it was a random spurt of inspiration I had to write(these insanely long work weeks and classes have me too exhausted to be inspirational anymore)"
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Love's strongest hold." by Deviated09
  • "Thank you very much =] I love old English and Gaelic, but there are so very few people that even know what they are, let alone appreciate them.."
    Posted by Deviated09 on "Eternally" by Deviated09
  • "Indeed a very excellent write. You've displayed the unspeakable thoughts that have run through my mind quite well. Many was there a time I wish I could of had that dismal cliff to overlook."
    Posted by Deviated09 on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker
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