Locked Inside

By poe_lover28

i watched them walk away
i pondered..would we ever be okay?
i wondered..would there ever be a day
that i can look at him and know what to say

I thought we had lost the fire..
now im sure..i think..mine will never tire
for his..i hope and pray he will reaqcuire..
days have past he seems shyer..
still so all consuming of lust, passion, my desire

though my feelings have no change
im so sure his have taken range
again..hes with her..my thoughts and feelings start to rearrange
my heart is locked inside a lion's cage

I see from afar..he is coming back
My body is all but slack
my thoughts raced..Protect your heart...Find a plan of attack
he wants me back? he wants me back! My heart lies still on a railroad track..

i may have been tricked i may be upset,
but now im so sure this is my best decision yet
no more tears, no more pain, only my hearts barrior to shet!
I am not afraid, no more will I fret!

I watched him walk away from me,
and now we'll see
will they forever be?
In love, eternally?

I watched him, with her, leave me
now my heart is free
down my face tears flee
tears because my heart is free, tears because we wll never be
 He and I, I and He

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Copyright 2012 poe_lover28
Published on Saturday, November 3, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

this was just something that came to me, ill be editing some other time
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  • A former member wrote: I can really connect with this poem. I've had an experience so similar to this. It brought back some memories and I can really understand the pain and hurt you wove into this poem. Kudos to you

  • poe_lover28 On Sunday, February 2, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    thank you so much!

  • A former member wrote: Closure and letting go, despite how painful it can be, is highly uplifting, as was this poem.

  • A former member wrote: This is an incredible piece, i love the flow, and it speaks of something I can relate to... much respect for you dear! Keep em' coming!

  • A former member wrote: This one I remember clearly. This was always my favorite one out of all your poems. As always keep it up Poe :)

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 29, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome imagery and flow. as you can tell I love rhyme :)

  • A former member wrote: Deep, real deep

  • poe_lover28 On Sunday, February 2, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    thank you:)

  • Deviated09 On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, Deviated09 (90)By person wrote:

    Very good write my friend. I can fit pieces of my own path into that all too well. I like how you set the rythm and rhymes thoughout. Nice work! :-)

  • poe_lover28 On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much Deviated!

  • A former member wrote: Very nice write.. I can relate. Keep it up :)

  • QuartzAl18 On Friday, November 23, 2012, QuartzAl18 (21)By person wrote:

    Sweet poem. To me its like a saddened heart trying to find its way after being so many times

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