Tintinnabulation

By poe_lover28

This was wriien in my favorite pink pen, hence the reference to pink ink. Just thought id clear that up. Enjoy!

 words & ink
splattered in pink
no one knows the link
between these words and 
what i think
no one even cares
all i get is stares
bored slient stares
never should i bother
never should i share
but every now & then 
i do
so let the poetry 
begin..

tintinabulation
shatters concentration
its ringing reputation
numbs mental lacerations
those bells tolling in my ears
jerks away all my fears
in its place arises drear
a lack of condition
drawing near
completed nothing stands still
within the rhythm
ive lost all will

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Copyright 2013 poe_lover28
Published on Thursday, March 7, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

just a clarification, i wrote this in my favorite pink pen thats why there is a reference to pink ink
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  • Deviated09 On Friday, April 26, 2013, Deviated09 (90)By person wrote:

    Such a good write! It's nice to see more works from ya! Your stuff is getting quite good :-)

  • HeadpatSlut On Sunday, March 10, 2013, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    I always like it when lines can be uneven and still flow so greatly, I think it goes by a little faster than it should though, not like it's too short, like the lines read too quickly, but a great write nonetheless, you shou Scholar

  • HeadpatSlut On Sunday, March 10, 2013, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    nonetheless, thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • poe_lover28 On Monday, March 11, 2013, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    i also got that feeling when i read it over, like the flow went very fast

  • brokensme On Friday, March 8, 2013, brokensme (20)By person wrote:

    great work, great to hear your poetry again. google is a good friend too lol. if ya need help you got friends around, remember that :D

  • poe_lover28 On Friday, March 8, 2013, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    lol my 9th grade english teacher had this 20 minute bullshit lesson on the word tintinnabulation once and it always stuck with me after that plus im an uber Poe fan and he uses that word

  • dwells On Thursday, March 7, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Had to Google the title (tintinnabulation), one of those not quite remembered words. So good to see you back and I think you just found your will again, cheers! Most enjoyable, ding-a-ling! (HA)!

  • A former member wrote: Thank you!! A musical chord flowed thru me while reading this and interestin a piece I have recently set aside has been rekindled. Thanx again.

  • A former member wrote: Wow the flow of this poem is excellent, really enjoyed it!

  • A former member wrote: nicely penned dear! Thanks for sharing!

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