Eternally
By Deviated09
Forever and forever
I await at the brookside.
More over floweth
the water.
Abade my stress, this sound do sooth
Forever
and forever
I wade the tides that bringest.
For the days do not
end, the nights grow shorter.
A bidding for the gods does my heart
yearn to please.
Forever and forever
I wander the lands
in my search.
For he spoketh to the elders, this fort night.
The
temptation be great, tho will be stronger than iron.
Forever
and forever
I hoped I'd meet thou again.
At the brookside now
ocean current.
Thy beauty remains as the great oaks trunk.
Forever and forever
If it were fairer, I would die first.
Tis
bliss to be in your presence as such.
Be wine ƒor ye rich, I shall
take her heart to mine.
Abound by these miracles
I live forever in thy name.
And forever for her
I live.
Forever and forever
Comments on "Eternally"
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On Monday, May 21, 2012, Deviated09
(90) wrote:
Thank you very much =] I love old English and Gaelic, but there are so very few people that even know what they are, let alone appreciate them..
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A former member wrote:
I really like your words and yes, like Undertaker said, it's an old traditional english, which really catches my attention
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On Sunday, May 20, 2012, Undertaker
(32) wrote:
I do enjoy a poet that likes to write in a older sort of language. Words most have seem to forgot. A heart that yearns, decided by the elders. This seems to be a very old tradition of how one's love was chose. Her heart meant to be taken by yours. A beautiful poem indeed, I enjoy your deep images. Together forever you shall live. Great write my friend.