Comments by sTr8-jAcKeT

  • "I've been going through a lot & haven't had a chance to be as involved as I'd like. But I'm fixing that. I miss you my friend, I miss your personality. Why is this goodbye for a while? You're still my Sol! One of my homegirls. Take care of yourself if you're leaving."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Dying Embers of the Somber Soul" by SolApathy
  • "~Through self-reflection ere this gaze, my mind a tortured game for days. One-sided views of anchors past, for truth now views from looking glass. I sought to tell you every dream but heart and mouth were stitched at seams. This box of chocolates toxic taste, shall be savored, not a waste.~ This was marvelous & refreshing. Frighteningly daunting to accuracies I'm sure most have felt. This was such an amazing investment of time reading. Thank you & excellent job! "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Toxicity" by SolApathy
  • "Grow from root to limb to rasp, this meaning deep if you take grasp. Very deep, the roots took me in. Thank you for this beautifully written deepness. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Gnarled" by SolApathy
  • "In this murderous place, that we find love a fool, ultimately just a victim as it succumbs to a tool. Loving to grab everything that we can, we forget all the powers we hold in our hand. If loves just a taste of what I might bleed, eviscerate my soul & take-out what you need. Beautiful darling."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Terse Reflections " by SolApathy
  • "And had I sought whispers, beneath darkened skin; my mind could attain the asylum within. But here I am brought to the reaches of grace, where willows would dream for the winters that save. I loved this, i wanted more; but this is insanity, this is beauty. Please, continue."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Saturation" by SolApathy
  • "Of wilted soul, that puddles so; I see the day is black. Tortured thoughts begin to rot upon this dungeons rack. Loved this piece."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Desiccation" by SolApathy
  • "You are so much more talented far beyond the scope of what you write. I'm being sincere, do not take offense for you are brilliance. Shine butterfly, more than you do; it is your right. I want to read so much more than this short. I love this kind of work."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Cellophane Shimmers " by SolApathy
  • "Wow, I didn't think you actually read people's input. Not to be mean, but realistically I would've commented endlessly regardless; but that kinda' brings a new element to thinking of how deep you actually read & really respond. Keep it up girly."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Gifts of the Sin" by SolApathy
  • "Damn this writing is beautiful, however you do have it inside you and you do possess the power. I can see it & sense it. Do not fear, you are powerful beyond measure."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Gifts of the Sin" by SolApathy
  • "Are you really this twisted and f***** up? Or are you merely posing as a facade of somebody very well versed in the English language? A professional profiling analyst would not be able to tell the difference. That speaks from somebody with CIA and FBI profiling background experience. Challenging I find the words within each person and how they continue to conduct themselves wether spiritually, emotionally or socially. I hope you are this deep, it speaks to me more than you'd believe from comments left in light reprieve. Stellar piece."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Musings of a Sinister Mind " by SolApathy
  • "So I don't know if you're aware of a person named Allan Sherman, he was a comedy-parodist from the 1960's. He was the inspiration of Weird Al. He did a song called "Waste of money," this very much reminds me of the joys you get before you realize the effort did nothing for end means. All beautiful in your imagery, but comical in comparison to that. Don't take offense, this is good! And my mind just works a bit different. Love your work Sol. Keep it up girl."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Autumn Desires" by SolApathy
  • "Let me start off by saying what a beautiful title. Next, I have an episodic piece-series which I only have the first part of them unfortunately at the moment. I know I said it was a bad move to do earlier but here I am doing it again, it's called Madness the Mouse. I am basically the embodiment of Madness and there are so many similarities to what you have here, robotic - inhuman & feeling. Just statistical interactions from Life, Experiences & more. If you're capable of seeing passed most things; see what you think. Madness is highly self-reflective of these facets. I love your work shug, this speaks to me greatly. More than you'd believe in a flowery, buttery comment. But I try to preserve myself 100% of the time, even now. Keep this up please. Gj."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Circuits of Cynicism " by SolApathy
  • "Now we're getting to the meat and potatoes; pun-intended. Delicious & not just for the strawberry flavors. Excellent sexual work. Respectable ma'am."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Intimate Treasures" by SolApathy
  • "I can't even begin to explain the depths of my sexual perversions, that I have not only been drawn to, but have had exponentially multiplied from a partner who was just as sick. I don't know the specifics of your case, however I can sense a similarity to which I'm sure you haven't voiced. If I am wrong, so be it. Great work, this got my juices going. Well done."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Chaos of the Carnal..." by SolApathy
  • "Girl you so crazy, writing like this is more soul & humanity than most. Full of life some would say, yet just bitter nothing's of your yesterday I imagine. Depends on how we look at it & then react; but the visage of a ghost who can't feel. Beautifully saddened. Thank you. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Sacrifices of my Sin" by SolApathy
  • "This was very soothing in a macabre reflection, I see passed the sadness; there are hilltops of opportunities within each of these feelings to embrace strengths in lessons, bolstering our own abilities to cope & move on with life before our deaths. Even if they are superfluous to how we feel. Thank you for weaving this sorrow so. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Burdens of the Broken" by SolApathy
  • "Gasping for breath amidst the tidal wave of human frailty. Desiring time to fix what we've let time wear down. Strange how sweet this notion is, thanks. Also, apologies if I said brother prior to this & it not be true, ma'am? Either way, gj."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Bloodstained Bubbles " by SolApathy
  • "Let me guess you have a bunch of black light glowing stars on your ceiling? I jest, lol. Loved the tying of the void being gone with the love of another at the end. Smooth ending man."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Realms of the Whisper" by SolApathy
  • "Please do brother, I fully support you & your thoughts. Thank you, perhaps one of those weird collabs are in order down the road. But, I miss posting new works. Hopefully soon, take care. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Ravages of a solemn mind" by SolApathy
  • "Man, had I read this before your [...fuckscapes] piece, that feeling remains the same however applicably more accurate here. Clench onto this muse Sol, here is where you belong friend, gj."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Analog Reflections " by SolApathy
  • "Alright my friend, I loved the feeling behind this one. I'm not normally one to do this; as I think it's a crud-move, but for once I'm going to recommend a work of mine to see how it lines up for you. Look for, -Beyond the Past- Hope to hear from you, I think you'll like it. But please, keep writing my man. This is what writing is believe it or not, answering the riddle with riddle."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "...Ravages of a solemn mind" by SolApathy
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