Comments by haunted

"I like this a lot, its pretty cool how the lust and fire teaches you whats inside of whats being taught inside the black soul, a lead by example situation. vampires can be cold, but they seek the warmth, and they destroy what they seek. you became her, what she taught. your ruthless, your a vampire, take your victim, your dinner and show them why vampires are feared and show them how its done. awesome poem!"
Posted by haunted on "To be as she" by DeepLoversPoet

"this is the first time I ever heard of death having an organized blueprint of where to go for a burial. its interesting enough. I think deaths role is for the death itself, to have him carry out a more or less funeral is like I said, interesting. I love poems about death and how he is seen or interpreted. I don't think anybody knows for certain, but what is certain is he is there, with his hour glass waiting for the thousands of souls to be harvested to their next destination. if you do the math, he never rests. its never ending for him. lol...sorry for my rambling, but you have a great poem here. I much enjoyed. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "For death to know where to go" by DeepLoversPoet

"very nice poem, sounds like you can have a life in fantasy and in reality. a life of desired passions. a life of borrowed time. but somehow its to good to be true. the devil is a dealer of dreams and a maker of nightmares. for some this is paradise, for others its time for an exorcism. for me, this was a good read. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "The Devils Snare " by DeepLoversPoet

"beautiful, sounds like your walls are up, it also sounds like you should get out of there because I think the walls that surround you are keeping you in. I can get a pretty big sledgehammer and we can take that fucker down. but the walls have such interesting tales to tell, like the fly on the wall...im listening. and the sound of madness has never sounded so good. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Walls of sorrow" by DeepLoversPoet

"this is so beautiful. the flow is outstanding in this. and yes roses have captured the hearts of many and even mended and melted many bleeding hearts. but i think the best way to enjoy them is to hang them upside down to dry and make them immortal for all to see. touch them up with some fabricated webs and you have a beautiful bunch of roses that take care of themselves. red roses turn to a very deep burgundy almost black hue. black roses were deemed as the kiss of death. it would be an honor to receive such sentiments. this is an outstanding poem, it really is. your talented as fuck and im liking it. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Lovely Roses" by DeepLoversPoet

"so true, for some reason i get the image of Vikings spreading battle for death to over see the carnage left by war. i feel sadness for death, for he carries the cries and the bodies to their demise. i think its depressing to have such a responsibility. war is not a time to reap, its a time to greive. for this mighty angel comes with open arms and holds no judgement. he ends the suffering and escorts you to a final resting. to me, war is not the occasion for him, its caring for the dead. this provoked a different chord in me. im a lover of death, and all its beauty. this is a really good poem, you did a great job with it. and sorry i went off in a tangent. but i thought it was relevant to your thoughts. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "A warriors sword " by DeepLoversPoet

"wow, you nailed a great piece here. this is amazing, i really love your writings, your in touch with your dark side your in touch with the flow of words and your a great writer. very impressive deep lover. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Ravens Wings" by DeepLoversPoet

"i love this, its got a cool story line. i love the ending, the image i got was the raven left you a gift but his gift was a curse. but the good thing is from the madness is wrought a great pen. i think people with pain make the best writers. and if your writing from an asylum, it don't get no better than this. haha awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Mad Raven " by DeepLoversPoet

"this sounds like me when im getting ready to write. the thoughts and ideas that come from below. the stirring of the mind, the preparation to go into the blackest thoughts that make poetry worth reading. im glad you don't write about rainbows, although im sure they would be rainbows in the dark. our imagination is a wonderful thing. and with such a short poem you covered the scramble to contain the words that become beautiful art. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "To Ink I Bow" by DeepLoversPoet

"well, actually i used to be a glass blower, haha and i bet i could of mended your heart with a little heat, but i couldn't fix whats in it. only time can do that. sometimes when a heart breaks it just lets us know were alive and that pain is real. you have to learn from it, its teaching us something and although painful. we learn, and we learn to trust again...not every body carries around a hammer, looking to shatter peoples hearts. but some have a heart of steel, but those who havnt learned still have a heart of glass. awesome poem!"
Posted by haunted on "A heart made of glass" by DeepLoversPoet

"i love spiders especially tarantulas. i used to have a bird eating species and she was fucking huge. just over nine inches, leg to leg. this sounds like a widow, the blackest of all spiders. now i love spiders but i see a widow and its dead. im terrified of them, but i love to dream of them and i admire them and respect them....when their dead! haha nice poem. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Spider " by DeepLoversPoet

"hey, im really familiar with that feeling. i think its the foundation of why dark people become dark. i think its pain and suffering and a desire to mock it, to become it. to dwell by its side and join it rather than fight it. this is a great pen, and your gifted by your words. thanks for sharing. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Comfortably Numb " by DeepLoversPoet

"oh so beautiful, i can see the graveyard and the fog and the dead and their seductive violins calling to the echoes of the night. such a wonderful image and damn, why cant i find a haunt like this. you created a place of life where death holds all its deceased. the cemetery is a very inspiring place. thanks for the stroll through a place of enchantment because im enchanted by this. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Beware of the violins of the dead" by DeepLoversPoet

"awesome, sounds like you should never fall in love with a poet. lol...im really liking your poems, i like the way you think. your poems are not predictable, im just lovin it. im glad you found dp, i hope you feel welcome and post often and make this your home. yay! another dark writer. haha"
Posted by haunted on "The King of hearts" by DeepLoversPoet

"yes, this is my kind of poetry. i love your darkness it lights up the room with glorious shades of black, so soothing to the eye. the images and pictures you created are much like my visions of the dark. we should become friends because friends in the dark are sometimes hard to find as im sure you know. excellent poetry, im in love. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Heaven Shunned me" by DeepLoversPoet

"bravo, i loved it, its got the perfect balance of dark and light and im a huge fan of maggots and death. i really liked this one. great job!"
Posted by haunted on "Dance of the dead" by DeepLoversPoet