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A heart made of glass
By DeepLoversPoet
Broken and shattered a heart laying in its own dust,
thou aren't so easy to mend - cry or cry not for this broken and battered
thing.
Is there glue strong enough to mend such hatred?
to bring together pieces of my heart that once bloomed like a rose?
I think not.
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Just Dave
(457)
wrote:
Life seems to chip away at the heart and mind. JD
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On Friday, March 28, 2014, haunted
(849) wrote:
well, actually i used to be a glass blower, haha and i bet i could of mended your heart with a little heat, but i couldn't fix whats in it. only time can do that. sometimes when a heart breaks it just lets us know were alive and that pain is real. you have to learn from it, its teaching us something and although painful. we learn, and we learn to trust again...not every body carries around a hammer, looking to shatter peoples hearts. but some have a heart of steel, but those who havnt learned still have a heart of glass. awesome poem!
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
Aw so true I have been through a few beak ups in my life but I still get up after and dust of the ash's plus all the fun goes into dating and meeting new people on the way.
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On Friday, January 17, 2014, Slingnasty
(138) wrote:
I liked this. Has innocent purity that was ripped up before ones eyes. and the strength to sow anger from a crushing blow. From pain transforming into the strength to say" Oh well your loss" Sorry Thanks
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On Friday, January 17, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
I'm glad you liked it thanks for commenting. :)
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On Friday, January 17, 2014, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Correct, but in the end, what you think determines what you feel, meaning, by feeling angry or disappointed, you just shoulder the hurt, and consequences thereof alone. Quite unfair in my opinion.
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On Friday, January 17, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
So true sometimes love can be unfair but this is not how I feel in reality it'ts but a poem. My true feelings are I have been dumped before but my heart movies on for I can get any guy I choose plus I think a guy wants a strong woman not a broken and battered heart. I Thank you for your comment. :)
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