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A warriors sword
By DeepLoversPoet
Knee deep in bloody war.
The battle of ages fought for day's.
Warriors spud all over the land.
Leave them bloody and battered for the tongs of hell.
Leave them to be eaten by the earth below.
Hell hath nothing but fury
licking up the leftovers of war.
Death stands above them
bowing to no one but the dead.
No more fighting, leave them where they fall.
Oh mighty death keep them warm inside your belly.
Teach them their lessons of fear and doubt
make them knowing you deeper still.
Let them fear their own doubt.
Hell hath no fury like a warriors sword.
Strong and mighty a warrior stands
does not matter if his death is at hand.
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On Saturday, March 29, 2014, haunted
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wrote:
so true, for some reason i get the image of Vikings spreading battle for death to over see the carnage left by war. i feel sadness for death, for he carries the cries and the bodies to their demise. i think its depressing to have such a responsibility. war is not a time to reap, its a time to greive. for this mighty angel comes with open arms and holds no judgement. he ends the suffering and escorts you to a final resting. to me, war is not the occasion for him, its caring for the dead. this provoked a different chord in me. im a lover of death, and all its beauty. this is a really good poem, you did a great job with it. and sorry i went off in a tangent. but i thought it was relevant to your thoughts. awesome!
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
I think we are all warriors fighting the battle of life and like you said death is just a helping hand waiting for us on the other side to guide and practiced us on our journey to the afterlife.
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On Wednesday, January 15, 2014, Void Vortex
(298) wrote:
Not at all... even if they die, their bad karma remains. There will never be any peace... DESTROY!
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A former member wrote:
I like how those first lines describe the terror and fear that rage relentlessly like a storm over the battlefield of war... and then those final few lines, they were so hopeful...it came as a surprise, that fierce air around it.....incredible
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On Friday, January 10, 2014, DeepLoversPoet
(50) wrote:
Thanks I tried to get the full imagery from the beginning trough till the end. Plus not all war ends in loss.
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