Walls of sorrow

By DeepLoversPoet

Deeply I will wonder in and out of this thought.
One moment to pond
one moment in my thought
darkness shrouds all that I know
feelings beseech all that I bestow 
as this heart bleeds through and through 
the walls show all my red awe
with splattered thoughts that drip so 
these walls know any of my sorrows and my woe. 

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Copyright 2014 DeepLoversPoet
Published on Tuesday, April 1, 2014.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • haunted On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, haunted (850)By person wrote:

    beautiful, sounds like your walls are up, it also sounds like you should get out of there because I think the walls that surround you are keeping you in. I can get a pretty big sledgehammer and we can take that fucker down. but the walls have such interesting tales to tell, like the fly on the wall...im listening. and the sound of madness has never sounded so good. awesome!

  • DeepLoversPoet On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thank you my friend it was one I work hard on to get just right. :)

  • blue angel On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    and the walls do weep... for her~ ...........Thank you, DeepLoversPoet

  • DeepLoversPoet On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    :) Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it.

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