Mad Raven

By DeepLoversPoet

This is the abstract idea of my quill, leaving an ink smear in your mind.

Quill vs Pen
Who's idea was it to use a feather to write and then call it a quill?
The idea to use a feather to write is an age old ideal. But the idea to use a pen with a ball at the end is a new ideal.

The Mad Man Wasn't To Wrong Was He?
The man from Timbuktu meat the man from Mars or he just lost his mind and so this event never happen, but in his own state of mind. It was like Alice and the looking glass he just needed to look in the mirror to see the truth. He was the man from Mars and the man from Timbuktu was no one. This is madness I do know but my brain field me long ago. I write this from the Asylum in a padded room, I got this feather from a Raven who dropped it after landed on my window sail. I thanked him by the way by feeding him my pills. I thought it was rude of Him not to return.
 
People & My Pills 
 People can be rude and out right mean. Like the nurses who give me my pills. They come handing me a cup with my pills, but I get only a small paper cup of water. Haven't these nurses learned anything about pills, it says on the boodle make sure you drink plenty of water. Ignorance that's what it is or just plain neglect.

The Asylum 
I keep hearing my neighbor yelling at herself trying to shut off the voices in her head. This is what you get for going mad. The Queen Of Hearts takes your freedom and her guards hold you down if you move wrong. But sanity is so over raided it's last weeks fashion statement. The only way you end up here is by going nuts and the paddy wagon comes to take you away. 

Mad Raven
He haunts my dreams black feathers and screeching. Feathers so black haunting me, in the shadows. His voice screams and scratches in my brain. Mad Raven has taken over my dreams!

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Copyright 2014 DeepLoversPoet
Published on Saturday, January 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Short Story"

Author's Note:

I'm writing a book called Mad Raven this is a snip it.
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  • haunted On Saturday, March 29, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    i love this, its got a cool story line. i love the ending, the image i got was the raven left you a gift but his gift was a curse. but the good thing is from the madness is wrought a great pen. i think people with pain make the best writers. and if your writing from an asylum, it don't get no better than this. haha awesome!

  • DeepLoversPoet On Tuesday, April 1, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    I did a paranormal investigations when I was in my late teens and one place I loved going to was an Asylum we stayed there for a full night it scared the crap out of me just made me want to go back.

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