Spider

By DeepLoversPoet

Eight legs creepy crawler
tending to her web
tenderly and with care
so not to leave a thread hanging on the edge
neatly she weaves sewing her bed
soon it will be ready
a trap for her pray
soon it will be dinner time
caught in her web   

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Copyright 2014 DeepLoversPoet
Published on Saturday, January 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • haunted On Friday, March 28, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    i love spiders especially tarantulas. i used to have a bird eating species and she was fucking huge. just over nine inches, leg to leg. this sounds like a widow, the blackest of all spiders. now i love spiders but i see a widow and its dead. im terrified of them, but i love to dream of them and i admire them and respect them....when their dead! haha nice poem. awesome!

  • A former member wrote: Actually quite cute! good descriptions :)

  • DeepLoversPoet On Wednesday, January 15, 2014, DeepLoversPoet (50)By person wrote:

    Thanks its a pleasure to hear you say that. :)

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