Comments by dwells

  • "Watch out whose outlook you grasp, but then if you ever took Debate 101, you learn to argue both sides of any subject too. Superb statements of rebellion and independence perhaps. Good luck to us all."
    Posted by dwells on "Invisible Flare" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Yea, but it was great fun and a constant source of wonderment while it was happening I'll bet? Especially liked your "Memory Lane" description, ultra cool and profoundly personal piece, thanks Sean. "
    Posted by dwells on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
  • ""Can't wish away a lack of trust" that whole stanza was especially powerful to me, when people put their own shortcomings onto others perhaps. Really enjoyed the groove this put me in, thanks Sean!"
    Posted by dwells on "Midnight's End" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Write onward and upward Sean, this was super, clever use of so many titles, many I recall. One major metaphor I can only guess at, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on " Challenge" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "From religion, to mythology, to dashed plans and a fallen angel perhaps, much to ponder with almost a touch of Dorian Grey at the end, well done Sean!"
    Posted by dwells on "Forever Promises" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Blackwater pond mind, what lies beneath? Much enjoyed and not familiar with this particular card trick, but maybe a metaphor for heroin abuse? Not sure and still pondering, thanks Sean"
    Posted by dwells on "Queen Card Death Trick" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "For your soul, for your hole - could have done a whole page on that line alone, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Couch Nap" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Agree completely with Magdalena's comment, edge of your seat mayhem and murder. One line reminded me of "what's the last thing that goes thru a bug's mind when he hits the windshield?" (his a** hole). Old one, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Interrogation Room #2" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Genuinely genius what you does to does. So glad she rocks your world, hold on tightly, cheers and much enjoyed SMS."
    Posted by dwells on "Last Dream" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Marvelous piece and really enjoyed the read - great images and moods from some ancestral history, cheers lad!"
    Posted by dwells on "Weaving Titles" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "This was incrementally incredible to all but the most hardened of hearts. Superbly sophisticated and may seraphs sing serenades of serene psalms. Cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on " " Moonshine "" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "This was one of your best I do believe, are you putting it to music perhaps? Pondering the lost love that is perhaps central to the piece, much to consider, thanks SMS."
    Posted by dwells on "Circus of Mayhem" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Don't know why but for a while there I was was back on the moors and into the peat bogs, although I've never actually been there in reality. Some chilling lines about what once was and never more shall be, thanks SMS, well done."
    Posted by dwells on "Tarantula Gardens" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Hot shit and go back to "Happy Heights", beautiful. This was an epic piece of independence and misogyny all rolled into one masterwork. Thanks and cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Badass Blues" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "SMS one stumble on this marvellous piece if I may, she's standing beside the car with gun in hand and pointing up to the sky etc. - then the central verse - followed by she lays her head down. Don't recall when she got in the car or how? Nit picking probably but just a minor tripping point. Really enjoyed this and it was somewhat reminiscent of "Natural Born Killers" but then you had your own crazy lady too as I recall, cheers dude!"
    Posted by dwells on "Rest for the Wicked" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "SMS this was super and edge of your seat from start to finish. Quite the portrait you paint so well, a wild ride, destination Hell. Sounds to me like she was starved for attention maybe, and cherish those good memories too, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Wet Nightmare" by Sean Mc Shane
  • "Sounds like an updated Bonnie and Clyde perhaps, or maybe Natural Born Killers by Quentin Tarantino? Anyway enjoyed the read and I'll try not to hitch-hike on your hunting grounds, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "R&R : Embrace This World" by Sean Mc Shane
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