Forever Promises
By Sean Mc Shane
Today, Tomorrow . . . whenever
I challenge the Keeper of Forever
Come back down to witness this
You, in all your false perfection
rolling the worthless myth onward
in a truely backwards direction
Then you fold it back more on some new correction
Your self-made philosophies come up short
You, and your whole
idiotic idea
with your back up lies falling
apart in court
By the end of your soul search report
You
knew nothing was written on that stone
when Mars remained constantly
silent
and Venus had always been left
alone
And now that you own absolute oblivion
You come to me for love
offering a handful of spent wishes
that you stole from above
Take
this time to dream of
what comes from
all this dead desire
join the ranks of the Fallen Order
hide your foul words deep in the mire
take more time to really
admire
how nothing good came of your game
as Your disturbing old self portrait
starts to drip from it's bone-shard frame . . .
Author's Note:
found in the gutter of Memory LaneComments on "Forever Promises"
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A former member wrote:
You're just awesome!! Thanks love!
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Thanks, '420. You're awesome too. Cool. Til next time -
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A former member wrote:
very nice. i can relete :)
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Thank you, SL. That's really cool. Til next time -
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
What a wonderful thing to find in the gutter of memory lane... "as Your disturbing old self portrait starts to drip from it's bone-shard frame"... I love the imagery this evokes in my mind..... Excellent Sean.
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On Friday, May 4, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Thanks, M. Sometimes you can find something cool in the gutter. hell, I found myself there a few times. Glad you like it. Always awesome to get your comments. Til then -
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On Wednesday, May 2, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
From religion, to mythology, to dashed plans and a fallen angel perhaps, much to ponder with almost a touch of Dorian Grey at the end, well done Sean!
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Thanks, d. Yeah, this kind of ricochettes all around the universe and back. Oh well, it was fun to chase. Thanks again, man. later -
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On Wednesday, May 2, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
How much do I love thee?. let me count the fucking poetic ways,, damn your good.. can i get a taste..
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612) wrote:
Thanks, Dev. And ditto. Til next time -