Interrogation Room #2
By Sean Mc Shane
Interrogation Room #2
" The sweet swirl of Her fragrance
rides the gentle breeze
Coming thru as loving thoughts
soothing my heart with ease
Our strange desires move us
and
the oceans begin to stir
as an evening storm rolls by
more wonderous feelings occur
She is my golden goddess
that
keeps my heart from hate
into Her deep emerald eyes
where
there are no signs of fate
fascinated by my wild words of wit
She
smiles at the slow return
and awaits more for me to say
as the oceans begin to churn
Our
new world was once just a wish
Our secret is Our love ever-growing
thru
in and thru out these turbulent waves
Our
inner light is always glowing
Our souls wed on the Shores of Time
pledging
Our hearts to Forever
We are the only ones to ever reach ourselves
no one else could - Never . . . "
I saw the look on that
cop's face. Even thru his raging stare.
A wee bit of confusion to
go along with the rest of this nightmare.
But that look faded quick,
as my twisted Manson-grin grew.
His blood boiled higher, as he asked
- then what did ya do ?
" I asked
her if she was proud of me
that I actually remembered that one
the first poem I ever wrote her
back when we had just begun
then I cocked the shotgun
and kept it at eye-level
while the Angel on my shoulder
was getting raped by the devil
even
thru all that comotion
I still managed to enjoy her crying
all
around the blood splattered room
her friends were now done dying
except
for her 'new dick'
who was crawling across the floor
I
shot him again
after I let him get to the door
I gave her a wink and a smile
I had never felt so fucking great
there is no higher power
than burning raging fucking hate
then I told her
thru an evil grin so perverse
this is the last time you will hear
my true-heart-words in poetic verse
. . . I won't be happy - until you are dead . . . .
then I blew her fuckin' face
out the back of her head "
The cop showed great discipline
and self contol.
He simply stood up and left me in the Q&A hole.
Bet he's going to get his gun. I'll be his finest slaughter.
Did
I mention that bitch . . . is also this cop's daughter ?
Author's Note:
I don't know, I wasn't thereComments on "Interrogation Room #2"
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Agree completely with Magdalena's comment, edge of your seat mayhem and murder. One line reminded me of "what's the last thing that goes thru a bug's mind when he hits the windshield?" (his a** hole). Old one, cheers!
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, d. The bug line is an oldie, but a goddie just the same. Glad you like this twisted tale. Always such high comps. later -
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Wow great job here Sean, the imagery this piece portray impeccable. Thank you for sharing and take care =)
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks for the cool compliments, GV. Have a good one. later -
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A former member wrote:
Oooooohhhhh Shit...... great write
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, V. Glad you dig it. later -
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
YES! YES! YES!!!!! Brilliant!!
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Ey Dev, I thought you'd like this one. I really apprechiate the HIGH compliments and B-Mark. Way cool. Makes me wish it were based on a true story. j/k. Thanks again. Til next time.