Challenge
By Sean Mc Shane
Every few hundred years or so, the dark gods who still dwell in the Earth
call upon us word-juggling mortals, to wage a war of words for what
it's worth
And it's worth it to me, like Time to clock
for
these dark gods are the ones who control the ever dreaded "Block"
They've
disrupted the creative flow, for far too long
filling so many with
great doubt and self judgements so wrong
They have destroyed countless
poets, before they could ever bloom
but not this One, my words will
never rot away in their forgotten tomb
I want to cherish their curses,
when they meet their defeat
and if I fail in this challenge . . .
I will bury my pen six feet deep
My name has been called, so now it's
time to go
wish me luck, but then again, how would you ever know ?
{ Somewhere deep
in the Caverns of Inner Earth }
I waited outside their ruined
temple, until I was told to enter
with a tattered notebook and a generic
pen, I stood in their Circle's center
surrounded by shapeless shifting
colors of gray, spectral voices spoke
I could sense their overconfidence,
they saw me as some kind of joke
so I made the first move, I tossed
the notebook to the ground
it's impact shattered the marble floor
with a thunderous sound
they were not thrilled with that, I topped
it off with a smile
they 'urged' me to begin the challenge, or was
it more of a trial ?
I decided not to ask, they were already on the
verge of rage
they felt the weight of heavy words I'd written on every
page
And don't mistake me for arrogant, my self esteem is close to
nothing
but we're dealing with beings "who think being a god still
means something !!"
But you know me, I had to push it just a little
more
before I began, I cleared my throat and spit on their cracked
floor . . .
" I started off on Memory
Lane, followed up by my Last Run
something Untitled
came from behind, as I watched
R&R Embrace
This World, and I was Willing To Follow
Spitting Mind Matter about The Good Ole Days and how
You're Not Supposed To Be Here, with My Better Half
along with my Wet Nightmare, entered my House of Dreams
where I found Rest For The Wicked, and so many
Words Forsaken, Within A Sacred Somewhere . . .
talk about Badass Blues and how We Were Right
though we were Gone For Good, somewhere in the
Tarantula Gardens or a Circus Of Mayhem, right below
the Chemical Gauntlet, under the sweet "Moonshine"
though still a Wasteland Pariah, Summer came in
leading to Memory And Foresight to a songbook of
Weaving Titles, just in time for a Black Water Baptism,
a Last Dream and a Charge Of Desperation for the
Mutiny In Heaven where a Star Maiden sat above
Interrogation Room #2, over a Shooting Star 1 & 2
followed by a quick Couch Nap, thoughts on Michelle
and back under Shooting Star 3 & 4 which lead me to
these Forever Promises . . . and this Challenge . . . "
the
gods mumbled amoungst themselves, about something forbidden
many
things in my strange presentation seem to be hidden
I told them the
piece I recited, was made of poems written at other times
You can
find their titles in each and everyone of those lines
they accused
me of cheating or lying, I just pointed to the notebook
but they knew
damn well . . . there was no reason to look
They got the message,
this is what happens when you give the Block
we mere mortals find
ways around it and that's when our shit really rocks
the Challenge
was reluctantly honored, the gods let me pass
and on the way thru,
I told them all they can kiss my ass
But this Challenge is far
from over, soon another Dark Poet will enter
I wonder who's next
in line to enter the Circle's center . . .
Author's Note:
get ready . . . you're next . . .Comments on " Challenge"
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A former member wrote:
This was awesome. I got lost in the words, the sea of intense metaphors within the metaphor iteself.
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On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, CL. That's cool, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Til next time -
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Write onward and upward Sean, this was super, clever use of so many titles, many I recall. One major metaphor I can only guess at, cheers!
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On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, d. I thought you might get a kick out of this one. later -
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
very cool... the metaphors were spot on... loved the dark humor, write on....
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On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, MD. Glad you enjoyed it. Dark humor is the best humor. Later -