Comments by The Lipstick Factor
- "Delightful little piece. Having been stung yesterday--seems judicious timing to read about the little critters. Well done."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Honey.Bee" by Sin
- "Creative and original--love how you started it with just "smolder"--great word, I was hooked right then. "do i have to
decipher
the meaning of the inbetweens"--my favorite part. Really well done-kudos."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "transposing ash" by AniDayz
- "Nicely done--awesome flow--this almost reads itself. Nice ending--lots of impact. Well done. And thank you for all the feedback on my writing--much appreciated. Gratitude."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Captured" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Are you looking for content or grammatical suggestions? The content is very good--excellent description/concept of poetry but there are a few grammatical errors. Not sure what you're looking for in way of suggestions so thought I would ask. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "To define a Poet " by Cherry Bear
- "Nicely composed-I like! Enjoyed the tone of this piece, light and playful while delivering a strong message. The final stanza brings things to a close neatly and leaves us with some thinking to do. Kudos, excellent piece."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Simple Sonnet - Life" by Henry Coldnight
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