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Your 6th deadly sin
By estherbell
You devoured me,ravenous,
skin and bones swallowed up whole
in one horrendous move.
You should have peeled me first
greedy bastard.
-The hairy bits will choke you.
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© 2008 estherbell
Published on Sunday, September 28, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, March 1, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
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wrote:
Wonderful! Bitingly humorous.
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On Monday, September 29, 2008, Aleas
(171) wrote:
Venus fly trap! Beautiful, enchanting, magnetic...then all the sudden your insides are being drained through some sort of oriface that didn't exist before. Unfortunately though, this guy (or girl) will eat some grass, puke up the pieces they couldn't digest, and move on their merry. Son of a B, I wish it didnt work that way.
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On Sunday, September 28, 2008, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Heh..Loved the humour of this piece. Nicely wrought :) -Carl
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