Your 6th deadly sin

By estherbell

You devoured me,ravenous,
skin and bones swallowed up whole
in one horrendous move.
You should have peeled me first
greedy bastard.
-The hairy bits will choke you.

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© 2008 estherbell
Published on Sunday, September 28, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Lipstick Factor On Sunday, March 1, 2009, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    Wonderful! Bitingly humorous.

  • Aleas On Monday, September 29, 2008, Aleas (169)By person wrote:

    Venus fly trap! Beautiful, enchanting, magnetic...then all the sudden your insides are being drained through some sort of oriface that didn't exist before. Unfortunately though, this guy (or girl) will eat some grass, puke up the pieces they couldn't digest, and move on their merry. Son of a B, I wish it didnt work that way.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 28, 2008, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Heh..Loved the humour of this piece. Nicely wrought :) -Carl

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