"Lush, aromatic, and colorful. My favorite line--"in the continuity
of curving
femininity."--fair rolls off the tongue! Kudos--excellent write.
" Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Un furnished Please" by surething
"Fabulous. Creative, unique, wonderful language and flow. The close is a perfect aphorism. Impressed-kudos!" Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "The Bored Game" by lovechild
"Right to my heart--as a mother I found this hard to read--the picture painted is just too real. Wonderfully poetic job of a very un-poetic subject. Well rendered, has impact." Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "dirty little smiles" by Taunting The Reaper
"Welcome back--tis been a long time since we've seen you in these parts. Hope all is and has been well. Lovely piece, soft and gentle." Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Love" by AdrianJ