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Willingness
By The Lipstick Factor
you have the potential to be exquisite
said He
how so?
said she
cocking her head slightly to one side
half smile
left eye slightly narrowed
rendering her face
curious
He said
as yet you are clay
anticipating the sculptor's vision
the canvas blank with anticipation
of the painter's dream
you are art to be
said He
oh?
said she
the line of her mouth in half smile
now drawing in upon itself
to reveal introspection
He watched
her face moved
liquid with thought
He watched
as she came to understand
the desire of the waiting clay
and blank canvas
she came to acceptance
face now languid and smoldering
and she said
i am ready
and she became willingness
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© 2008 Lipstick Whore
Published on Monday, April 21, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Willingness"
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A former member wrote:
Nicely done, and artistic. I think this is one of the better ones I´ve read.
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A former member wrote:
i've loved all your poems so far but this is the best!! thank you for sharing the beauty inside yourself with me!
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On Saturday, April 26, 2008, colorapathy
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wrote:
I like the flow of your work in general, as well as the subject. You remind me of someone I know very well. This piece is the one that caught my attention the most. Well done.
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On Tuesday, April 22, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Thank you for the positive feedback. I think I am going to enjoy this place...
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On Saturday, April 26, 2008, carlosjackal
(3017) wrote:
Make sure you upgrade..Many a talent has been lost to no-upgradedness :(
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On Monday, April 21, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
wonderful rendering you've created here... flows easily and unhindered brushing conciousness and contemplation... well done
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