For Carrie

By Derelict Dream

Like a flower never quite touched by the dew,
Like a moth that never reaches the flame,
Though our longing makes us feel blue,
We beg and plead for it again and again.

To imagine being with the one whom we love,
Is to imagine a life like in heaven above.

Its the thing with which the candle of our lives are ignited,
Its love, and so often, its unrequited.

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© 2008 Derelict Dream (David O. Wilkins)
Published on Tuesday, April 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Rebel tiGer King On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    soft indeed, a piece that gravitates very gracefully, nice write brother -symph-

  • The Lipstick Factor On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    Oh...*claps hands*...this i love!

  • A former member wrote: this is very beautiful... soft and tender like the love you described.

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