Comments by urbanhumility
- "you carry a unique path in your verse......easy on the eye.....but providing "the pause and the afterthought" of eloquent prose......well done, ............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "pulp: generation" by Jonas
- ""the potential is consummated in my wealth of abstracts" this line is you my friend, it's all in the "pudding" you might say......you have written well.............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "i wrote it because" by Jonas
- "your words take on a mechanical verse....explanation of tenderness and depth....in this articulation you give sterile truth to somthing you feel...live.............well done my friend...........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "wintersong" by Jonas
- "a quandry into lifes intrinsic voids......a rare insight into a tender confession.....drawing out truth ....to work its....divine actualization........well done my friend............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "the first of last year" by Jonas
- "this is the formula to you, your explanation is what i have sought..and you have given it freely...the mark of a gentle-man..and remember a "fish" can never fish for complements...they are simply given.."
Posted by urbanhumility on "a man of me" by Jonas
- "the freedom of your words.....will open the "door"..............well done pescado.................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "falling hard" by Jonas
- "you are very much the stranger my friend..........you embody much of your subversive verse...........your introspect through prose........beautiful..................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "martian attack" by Jonas
- "your prose draws fast and intelligent imagery........well done....................pescado..........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "beat" by Jonas
- "an interesting parallel .......made with words so eloquent...............well done............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "shaving" by Jonas
- "you seem to tell the strict truth of the human conditon here......well done......your sight is truly keen......................well done ........................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "hold me" by Jonas
- "this title appeals to me..............of course. and your words are well spoken.........course........well done.....................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "modestly" by Jonas
- "intrinsic to your nature my friend......your life is well documented by fine words and even finer imagery.......well done my pescado.....well done..............urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "naked in a chair" by Jonas
- "i too am taken aback......eloquent in its asking....or perhaps telling......for some reason.....this moment only.....this prose is more than than the rest.........well done pescado.....urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "dross" by Jonas
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