modestly

By Jonas

and for a moment
all i am and all that is to me
comes flooding in with a song

and i no longer fear the truth
and i taste tears in my smile
while
nothing makes sense and
is as it should be

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© 2005 Jonas
Published on Saturday, November 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: great write really

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    this title appeals to me..............of course. and your words are well spoken.........course........well done.....................urban

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, November 13, 2005, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    a perfect and concise summary. well written.

  • elisa On Saturday, November 12, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ...gives me a warm sense of satisfaction....i could be carried away by this......absolutely

  • Wolk On Saturday, November 12, 2005, Wolk (54)By person wrote:

    In small poem feelings burst in readers brains. Good job

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