pulp: generation
By Jonas
i may catch you in the second circle
on a seat of glass i
still have that crooked glance
that intrigued you then
but you let your hindsight name it a warning
i always could talk but it sounds like
a chant as we go on for miles
i could try to tell jokes but i never
had a knack for the timing
then climbing the mountains
in the thin air i remembered myself
just in time to see the moon
rise in the way that it used to
when i was a teenager looking into
windows in the deep night
still grasping the last dying
notions that something beautiful and arcane
goes down somewhere after bed
one day the uttermost west
will fall into the sea
that much i think i can say for certain
and inch by inch it's made true
by each little raised ripple
on the water
then you met me half way for once in a life time
you asked me to dance but i never liked
to dance
so i declined
when it was i akward i said i loved akward moments
and you stared at me coldly
then quietly slipped from the room
i drank to my lust
and i drank to my demons
i drank to every person in the room
on my way home my head played a pop song
and my throat howled anyway at the little sliver
of a moon
in tune with the frequencies of the breeding earth
she waited for me at the front door
with a cigarette
she hadn't smoked since i'd known her
but now she held a pack
and like that it didn't matter
but the memory of her body comes back to me now and then
when there's nothing else to think about
one day the last of the west
will be bought and sold
we'll guard what's left of our treasures
and quietly we'll grow old
Comments on "pulp: generation"
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On Saturday, April 25, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
I love the anecdotal vibe perpetuating the feeling you portray in this. Great poem.
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On Friday, March 13, 2009, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
you carry a unique path in your verse......easy on the eye.....but providing "the pause and the afterthought" of eloquent prose......well done, ............urban
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On Friday, March 13, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
but the memory of her body comes back to me now and then when there's nothing else to think about.....ahhhh jonas Iclick for a random poem....and i make your introduction once again
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On Friday, March 13, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
and I'm pleased to say...this did not dissapoint me in the least....some how i feel I've been right where you have walked.
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On Friday, March 13, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
enchanting...haunting....left me feeling hollow.....
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On Friday, March 13, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
your powers of observation...and detailed emotional clarity still impress and amaze me.....
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On Sunday, January 13, 2008, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
dim and delicate. x
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On Sunday, June 3, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
that there last stanza could be placed at the end of all your writes ... and fit as well ... because there is your eloquence .. there is your superhero power ... the eloquence of your moments strung together into living days, years, lifetimes - your aware
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On Sunday, June 3, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
awareness is your strength, and in the writes- it's your ally... i let this piece happen to me a few times over, and i appreciate the peek inside your treasure chest ... there's magic in there ...
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On Sunday, June 3, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
your writes are a playground for anyone who ever stopped for a second... and owned the moon. everything matters - funguy