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Comments by Distorted_Reality

"Nice train of thought. like the description, but the ending was a kinda weak. It didn't even really seem as if it did end. Idk I have a weird perception...I'm sure others will think the ending to be just fine...all in all...nice job."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "tragic elitism ['08]" by chrome arctic

"I don't know how I didn't read this before...and why I decided to read it today...but I've fallen in love with this particular piece and I'm not even sure why...maybe because how much I can relate...maybe because it's different than most free verse...but I really like this...-end."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Prose II :: The Waking" by RhymeBound

"I just keep coming back to this...:)... to be honest it's my favorite post I've seen on this site yet...and I can't even tell you why...I just know that I really love this piece..."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Without Reason (illustrated repost)" by stuart_pid

"I actually really enjoyed this...It was a nice train of thought...and uplifting unlike most poems you see on here...cool."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "I am going to make it through this year if it kills me." by WhoIAM

"you really should post more of your art...you have a fan :)...well actually you just need to post more period...you have much talent with art and writing ;)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "[barely there]" by stuart_pid

"This artwork is incredible...The poem is pretty hard to read, but I see you put it up in another post so I had to read it :)..and just like this artwork I find the poem just as amazing...with that said *bookmarks*"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Without Reason (illustrated repost)" by stuart_pid

"holy shit. This is incredible and deserves way more comments. So true. Damn I would bookmark but I need to upgrade. My bookmark space is out of room :( But definently a future bookmark for I just love this piece that much :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "The World's Biggest Lie" by darkness_descends

"After reading this I had to read some more of your poems and I wasn't disappointed at all. Incredible write. I hope you will post more. Your poems really speak to me :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "horrorshow (disgusted by reality)" by anathema

"the rhyming scheme needs worked on a bit, but all and all you did a nice job. "
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Anodyne" by lycaonhybrid

"This would definently go along well with music. It played a nice tune in my head. It also painted a picture and had a good train of thought. Nice."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Spray Paint Butterflies and Grey Matter Calligraphy" by Bella Butchery

"haha well written...and had me laughing...nice ^_^"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Fun with Mr. Pencil" by Efamilia

"This was truly beautiful, it almost played a song in my head :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Submissive to you *" by Adam

"I of course agree strongly with this. You make so many valid points. I didn't really like the flow too much though...it seemed to trip up a lot...*shrugs* maybe I just read it wrong...but it was a fantastic write nonetheless :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Sermon (a rhyming rant at Catholics and Christians)" by shadowsinthelight

"wow brilliantly worded. Such sad but beautiful imagery. I agree with all these comments below me. Just...an incredible write :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star

"but strife does rhyme with life lol sometimes I don't understand peoples comments ha, but this I feel was a pretty good write I always see my self coming to your site in times I feel the need to read :) I do hope you keep writing I see you haven't been posting for a while :(....I wish to here more =0"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "your nightmare, my dreams" by Bloodofdeadpoets

"lmao...dude you're awesome :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "shakespeare" by skully

"ok I truly loved this because you are one of the few people I've read that can pull of gorey writes :) and I agree with the comment below me hehe ;)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "So Pretty" by DowngradeBeauty

"This was beautiful. Normaly I'm not so much for love poems, but this is definently one of the better ones I've read so far...Your descriptions are very well thought out. I like the imagery a lot. Great Write! ~Star~"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Take My Love" by thelostmessenger

"This is really genius. It reminds me of something I wrote a while ago (minus the german) but written out way better than I had attempted. Awesome!"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Boy of Ash and Cigarettes." by Kurashu

"man do I feel the same... I loved the used of analogies and descriptions. Very well thought out. Awesome write! ~Star~"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "In Death We Are Wrapped in Caskets Like the Womb" by xserratedsoulx

"I agree with sIo the rhyming scheme needs worked on then it would be really good, for now it's passable :)"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on ""Carousel Ride"" by Trigger

"This deserves more attention and comments. It was brilliant and so true. Great write!"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "The pen is mighter than the sword" by Circe Avalon

"smooth flow, and I like how well you portrayed the topic. Nice!"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Lucifers Broken Girl" by Circe Avalon

"I truly love this.I can relate so much. Even if I didn't how you had described it can make anyone feel the emotions and thought you put into this. Brilliant write!"
Posted by Distorted_Reality on ""Yearning"" by Grim_Sorrow

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