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Submissive to you *
By Adam
Submissive to you
Never has anyone seen this part of me
I lay here dreaming, dreaming that you could control me
I am a nice, assertive, and humble person, what could possibly be
wrong with me?
Some say I am obsessed with you,
Some say I love you,
Well they’re right I would stop
at nothing to please you
I would do anything for you,
Go anywhere to be with you,
Not even God could hide
you
Well maybe nothing is wrong with me
I know, society just has it in for meÂ…
But still your
pleasure gives me my only glory
.
.
.
Me, submissive? Only to you, my mistress
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© 2005 aldldl
Author's Note:
I had written this to/about Vaultgrl (dp/10000)Awards
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2016, Star
(879)
wrote:
this is amazing. I'm glad I came across this. great write, Adam. I love it. 10
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2016, SilenttPerception
(27) wrote:
Very fun read. Brilliant, lets just leave it at that.
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2016, Adam
(242) wrote:
Thank you very much.
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
OH MY! I LOVE THIS EROTIC PIECE!
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A former member wrote:
amazing work. you're quite talented
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully written!
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On Monday, January 14, 2008, Distorted_Reality
(100) wrote:
This was truly beautiful, it almost played a song in my head :)
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful!
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Dom/submission...lovely.
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, Adam
(242) wrote:
Thank you very much, This one my favorite ones (That I have done)
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Fabulous.
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On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This was just wow, I loved it, it gave me a woozy feeling like I was drinking, and I couldn't stop. This was full of all the right emotions and just made me break
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On Sunday, January 1, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
ok iv read this a couple of times and i like it more each time. i think this is my favorite of all of yours my sexy man whore ;)
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On Saturday, January 21, 2006, Adam
(242) wrote:
thank you very much Erin
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On Sunday, January 1, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
ah, i like this ;). you're a rather good writer :)
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On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Adam
(242) wrote:
nothing like you. if im part good your amazing :)
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
wow..this "mistress" would be one lucky chica...but anyway...another great write..i myself have never felt this way..well..i did..but that dun count..but anway..its awesome..-Kel
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On Sunday, December 4, 2005, Vexed
(74) wrote:
wow, how interesting...it would probably be nice for the person you wrote it about...
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On Sunday, December 4, 2005, Adam
(242) wrote:
too bad she will never know... unless she some day askes me to do something that i would not do for anyone else... but i think the person knows i do but not the extent that i would go for her :)
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On Saturday, December 3, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
o0h i like i like ;D it all flows together so perfectly! bloody brilliant work ^__^
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On Thursday, November 17, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
nice, i love the lil twists and turns, nut God is capital G when meaning the one true God, if that matters to you or not, keep up the good work
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On Thursday, December 1, 2005, Adam
(242) wrote:
It has been fixed :)
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On Thursday, November 17, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...wow adam, i can't beleive i had to beg you to post this......it's great, i love the last line...it's a different style for you, and i can't wait to see more of it...keep it up adam....*wonders who mistress is while walking away*...
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A former member wrote:
wow...u have grown. this was REALLY good. i am impressed. *applauds*
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A former member wrote:
Awwww...*swoons on her feet* How sweet...I wish I had someone this bent-up over me...beautiful write Adam. *Evangel*
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
hmm this was actually nice...sing-song like...i could play this with mah guitar, but that'd be stealing. ~m~
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