Comments by Fantecstasy

"Your step by step metaphors could have made a beautiful sonnet proud, but alas you'll always be free from that form. I really enjoyed it, and when I say that it flowed, it's not just because I'm looking for a positive word to use, it's because it actually had linked metaphors and similes within the same stanzas and did not deviate until the next. So yes, you did exceptionally well, and I mean that with all due literary enthusiasm."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Awaken Me; Awake In Me." by Echoes of Orpheus

"haha, made me chuckle. Quite well done. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "And Her Name Was Connie Lingus" by climaks

"I thought it was possible, but I never actually thought that I would see the day when Star Trek and poetry met. Hehe, good write anyways, definitely impressive. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Dear Borg" by Electra Woman

"Magnificent and flowing. It was a pleasure to read your work as always. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Winds Do Shift" by TheUltimateOutlaw

"Rightly so, "angels and lesser gods, who've had their time in the sun." wonderful words. The tone of denunciation and enlightening is excellent. *tips hat* "
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Something Else" by Blood Saga

"Now that's my kind of love. Wow. *tips hat many times over*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "all i wanted" by BrokenAngel

"I'd favorite this instantly, but I need to upgrade still... Definitely made me smile, and very well done. Sensational, as it were. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Fantasy & Ecstasy" by Echoes of Orpheus

"Capital, and intoxicating. It was a pleasure to be able to read this. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Swan" by mysticventures

"This has been perhaps the most insightful thing I've seen all day. You deserve a drink for this at least. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Midnight Eclipse." by Echoes of Orpheus

"+1500 GC, haha! Seriously though I did read all of it. Not too bad for the grammar, not perfect but still readable. An interesting ending as well. It may be rather short, yet it maintains its excellence none the less... especially for an assignment. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Legend of Kusanagi no Tsurugi" by Mithiras

"I was thinking something along one of those lines... "...watch the thing you loved most / slip away from you" You seem to have put me back to square one though. Excellent words stirring less favorable images, as vividly as most unwanted things do. But I won't drudge on about what this meant to me, you're beginning to move beyond your typical writing here. Capital stuff sir, I look forward to more. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Thing About Guilt." by Echoes of Orpheus

"I love the irony of the title that drips down when every word of this poem clings to "what was" rather than a new age. Oh, and "The world has changed / and the meanings behind those classic love poems / are wilting with their pages." - classic line, exceptionally done. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "New Age Romantic." by Echoes of Orpheus

"You deserve more credit then I can give for this sir. You've come a long way... a very long way. "let me cease to be / May god still his hand / and not pen my life / so much as one more page without you." You're answering the question To be, or not to be, with an answer in deadly affirmative form. I'd go on further but I don't think your ego needs to be stroked anymore. ;) *tips hat* "
Posted by Fantecstasy on "When Heaven's Not Enough" by Echoes of Orpheus

"Terrible beauty. I wish this didn't weigh so heavily on me, but it does, and it's still so perfect. Lovely. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "If You've Never Been Loved By A Poet" by Carmina Gitana

"Ah, the corruption of passion, or love, whichever. It can produce handcuffs, whips and lotions, but it can also produce broken hearts. I don't know which you fall into, possibly both. I seriously hope you find someone for you. You have a lot to offer someone. Really enjoyed the attempted circular shape of the poem too, nice touch. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Centrifuge" by TheUltimateOutlaw

"Capital... quite. I love the water imagery, there's always something extraordinary about it. Either I'm reading this differently or your style is changing slightly, but the intro seemed to have a different tone than most of the other pieces. Great stuff though. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Of Cracks and Perfection." by Echoes of Orpheus

"Cold, but horribly true. Loved as always. You rock. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Alternate Endings" by TheUltimateOutlaw

"Kind of made me laugh, but it was also pretty hot at the same time. I think it was the reference to doing it with the windows open in the dead of winter... definitely made it worth while. Very good though, I only hope I find a girl who wants it like that. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Make Your Play" by TheUltimateOutlaw

"Vicious and tantalising, the whole damn thing. Wonderful stuff. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Nana and Saturnin" by palenoble

"This reminds me of Manson for some reason. Anyways, it was a pretty dark portrait, worded rather well. The capital letters were... interesting. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "IN THE CHAMBER OF DREAMS" by lovechild

"I definitely read this."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Me being an ass." by Prophint

"Impressively dark toned, and quite well written. Again, I still can't leave a comment good enough for this. Needless to say I loved it. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Lonely For Them Both" by TheUltimateOutlaw

""Clever plagiarism is where the money is" you may want to copyright that... :p Thanks for the mood lifter, needed it. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Virgin Moonshine" by Echoes of Orpheus

"Absolutely, in-fucking-credible... *Gives his hat to Outlaw* It was worth every moment to read it through. I'm quite speechless after this."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Drown Your Sorrows" by TheUltimateOutlaw

"Well spoken. You're provoking insight where it is not usually demanded. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "A shared burden..." by Ashteroth

"I thought this was great, seeing sense or logic in the face of a romanticized emotion, infatuation or "love", either one which inhibits the mind. Enjoyed reading it though, *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani

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