Centrifuge

By TheUltimateOutlaw

Passion;
A centrifuge
Spinning my blood
Into something
Corrupt.

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© 2009 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Monday, March 2, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alanarchy On Monday, March 2, 2009, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Hahah. Metaphorgasm.

  • A former member wrote: you know, I've read this three times and honestly, it reminds me of those science labs with blood samples that spin. and out of one grows a red rose. spun to fast, blew its petals off. *tilts head* yeah, brings that right behind my eyes. crazy awesome

  • Fantecstasy On Monday, March 2, 2009, Fantecstasy (120)By person wrote:

    Ah, the corruption of passion, or love, whichever. It can produce handcuffs, whips and lotions, but it can also produce broken hearts. I don't know which you fall into, possibly both. I seriously hope you find someone for you. You have a lot to offer someone. Really enjoyed the attempted circular shape of the poem too, nice touch. *tips hat*

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Monday, March 2, 2009, TheUltimateOutlaw (43)By person wrote:

    Your comments always make me smile and feel slightly better about whatever horrible mess I've gotten myself into, just so you know

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