Comments by Narcissa
- "I think it was all said in those last two lines...bam! and damn!...Ive missed your writing."
Posted by Narcissa on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "I believe I was inspired by your last post...since it was the last thing I read last night and this was spinning in my head this morning...so thank you...I think. I suppose it could have ended different...but I just write what's inside...like the rest of us."
Posted by Narcissa on "I am..." by Narcissa
- "and as I watch my winter day turn into an even colder night...depressingly cold...I find a smile in your words...thank you."
Posted by Narcissa on "Kat" by chococat_122
- "every rose dies...everything dies...but there is birth in every seed. I know. I killed everything once....everything blooms beautifully in its own time. Don't stop tending your garden and I bet you'll be surprised,"
Posted by Narcissa on "To my dead rose" by Scorn Me
- "its amazing what one person sees verses another because this took me to a distant place...one that no longer exists...and maybe never did...such beautiful words from a beautiful soul."
Posted by Narcissa on "Fireflies" by Leith Plunkett
- "Some hearts brake so beautifully...and its sad when the well dries...so the longing starts all over again...you always know how to thread your words with pure poetry..."
Posted by Narcissa on "when lips taste like ashes." by Six-Out
- "Everyone has got to experience an old car...I have an old truck that just 'sits around' but the character in the way he spits when his wheels spin is unbeatable...what a great piece..."
Posted by Narcissa on "A Worthy Junkyard Grave" by timekop
- ""I learned to fall without fear
Sing devotion to your deaf ears
To hang every hope on drunken promises
Trust without question
Love without reward"...especially that last line...a type of devotion that regardless who the "Old dog" is...nothing changes that love...but isn't love a reward in itself? I work w/animals and am constantly watching them leave this world...anyway this hit home w/me...and these lines are perfect!
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Posted by Narcissa on "Old dog" by Lylani
- ""trace my veins. . .
so that i might find my heart
again." This line made the piece...love it.
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Posted by Narcissa on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
- "Sometimes poems are more like music and this one sang to the beat of my heart...enjoyed this a lot...I need to check out some of your other works."
Posted by Narcissa on "Among Bramble and Thorn" by FallenSky
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