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I dare to see what i look like to you
By Rebel tiGer King
When I look in the mirror
I notice I've fallen
Behind the gray
wall
Behind my smile
Another masque
And for you baby
A thousand candles
One for each tear
You've bled for me
Surrounding me
Facing up
The pain is sharp
The air is
thick
And your fingers
Are an eternity away
And for a moment
I dare
To break outside my pity
So that for once
I dare
To see what I look like to you
*written with carlosjackal*
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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Friday, January 29, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
written with carlosjackalComments on "I dare to see what i look like to you"
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Narcissa
(404)
wrote:
you guys rock...this turned out great!
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A former member wrote:
It's really hard to tell this was even a collab. Your styles mended together so well. And the words, the place.... too familiar. Very very good. +tpu+
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Nice collab fellas. I often imagine how I must look through the eyes of others. Hopefully the reality is better than I think it probably must be. Nicely written.
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A former member wrote:
*blinks* I must remember to try that, just look with no judgement. hm, this is gonna be tough...~moony
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
We did ourselves proud, RebellTiger :)
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
sure thing brother, many thanks and hope to write with you again soon -symph-
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, sIo
(926) wrote:
i love this. the last line is amazing. this is just freaking awesome
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Thank you, Jo :O) This is probably the best co-write I've ever done, so super dope thanks to RebellTiger for asking me to do the collaboration.
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