Comments by All Members
- "Love is such a quagmire. ... Truely. Much thanks for sharing and my condolences. It's a trap and the Agony ahead is the surest thing even in such an uncertain world. Desire has driven endless enamored to an earthly grave. Keep what composure you've left still, to keep hold and fill this life you live. Or else risk giving way to a cheap hand and the highest stakes"
Posted by Shaded_Iris on "Quicksand" by Aethelwyne
- "Those fleeting moments we hold dear will be forever ingrained into our minds. "
Posted by Smiles on "Someday" by Aethelwyne
- "Love is like quick sand, pulling you in before you even notice the trap. I loved the last stanza, demanding the reality and proof that the love you share is sincere. This speaks to the heart. "
Posted by With love_Crow on "Quicksand" by Aethelwyne
- "This is an instant favorite for me man, I can see why it was poem of the day for sure, I was hooked on this one all the way through, this is amazing, such a selfless message to, sacrafice of oneself for one's love, even though she love him no longer, thanks for sharing."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Letter to the Dead" by Aethelwyne
- "The best POD I've read so far. I feel like you're speaking to me, the whole poem is beautiful. I'm at a loss for more words.
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Posted by Unknown on "Letter to the Dead" by Aethelwyne
- "Incredible. This is the first poem I ever gave a 10 to, it was raw, real, and so eloquent... It took my breath away. If this is something you're going through, please don't give up, love IS out there... I know everyone says it, and I know you feel either they lie or you must be broken because you're the only one without, but... Love isn't all sunshine and rainbows. It takes work from both people, and if your partner isn't willing to work, well... the relationship won't either. Anyways, you're an amazing writer, and hang in there!"
Posted by Unknown on "Tomorrow" by Aethelwyne
- "No matter who we are or what we've done, at some point in time we all wished we'd done things differently. But if we could all do that some of us would not be here today. Think of things past as purely experiences and move forward with the knowledge you've gained : ) great write"
Posted by johnbevan17 on "Take Me Back" by Aethelwyne
- "you have an uncanny gift for writing tera jerkers. keep on espressing your pain in writing..... it helps.doesn't it?"
Posted by natalie on "Hidden Hearts" by Aethelwyne
- "Love the word play "Drink the wine of it's broken spirit" A good write. I enjoyed this."
Posted by Unknown on "Follow" by Aethelwyne
- "~there's a rushing feeling that comes with reading this poem, really great that it accompanies the message of helplessness and despair...cool write"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Enough" by Aethelwyne
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