America The Damned

By Aethelwyne

These games add to the defamation
Of our sick, sadistic nation
And may arise the armageddon
Silence our hearts, so heavy and leaden
Our leader, an escort to our graves
The road to our downfall, he paves
Condemning us all to certain death
Until the land of the free gasps its final breath

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Copyright 2005 Willow
Published on Thursday, September 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Political" and "Poetry"
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  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    My prayers go out to those, of who are out there fighting under another man's beliefs, wishing only to be home with family. *tear* -Heather-

  • A Burning God On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    Nice concept for a possible outcome. Odds are, the downfall of America will come, and another nation will take its place, just like histroy illustrates.

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    I could not agree more. America is Rome come again, and it will fall in our lifetime. a great write.

  • PoeticHellion On Wednesday, September 7, 2005, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Mmmmhmm. I couldn't have said it better myself. But you knew that of course.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, September 2, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    ha yep pretty sick... the tragedy is (i'm australian) and he's basically escorting us and everyone else down the same dank grave-pit... not that it's been any different for a long time now

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, September 2, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    but a great write and decent rhyme

  • Thorn On Thursday, September 1, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    I like it. I'm sure Hellion will go crazy over this when she reads it.

  • glasshouse On Thursday, September 1, 2005, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    condemning* -Glass

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