Enough

By Aethelwyne

Will someone please stop me
They're all calling out to me
Yet i see no one
I keep turning in confusion
I dont know who or where to run to
I choke on my tears and fall
But my mind is still spinning
I reach out for something
Anything to slow me down
To help me up
But theres nothing there
Someone has taken it all away
Theres just this spinning
How am I to continue living
When I can't breathe
When I can't stand
When i'm so torn into pieces
Where am I going
How do I stop
Im so sick and i've had enough
Am I awake or is this a Nightmare
If it is, please:
someone wake me


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Copyright 2005 Willow
Published on Saturday, June 11, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Rebel_not_Radical On Saturday, March 3, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (75)By person wrote:

    ~there's a rushing feeling that comes with reading this poem, really great that it accompanies the message of helplessness and despair...cool write

  • the dried flower On Saturday, March 3, 2007, the dried flower (67)By person wrote:

    i like...

  • Thorn On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    This is a good one. I like the style; very authentic.

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